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Pollution and other environmental problems are resulting from a country's developing and becoming richer. Some think this cannot be avoided. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Pollution and other environmental problems are resulting from a country's developing and becoming richer. Some think this cannot be avoided. MP09
Since the developing in countries, the environment and pollutions causes are being increased which cannot be neglected. I agree with this statement to great extent and will discuss in the upcoming paragraphs. To commence with, there are several reasons behind this happening. First and foremost, develop countries has a wide range of industrialization area which are created by clearing a large part of the forests area therefore, this is directly effect on not only climate but also effect on wildlife. Secondly, industries and other factories use the harmful and cheapest toxic during the manufacturers in order to become richer in early time. During few years, the large number of dead fishes are being declined around the world because the wastage put into the rivers and oceans which is emissioned by foctories In contrast, despite the agreement of this, there are also some factors which support that environment damage caused not mainly by developing nations it can be seen that pollution and environmental problems has prominent factors in some poor countries. For instance, according the recent research, a few garmants factories in the Bangladesh, cause far more damage to the air as well as water than hundreds of bigger industries in the United States. To conclude, although it is the problematic effect in all over the universe, it is not only created by richer nation, there are also numerous poor nation which also play vital role in the damaging of the environmental problems. we still have time and lot of option to reduce adverse effects.
Since the developing in countries, the environment and pollutions causes are
being increased
which cannot
be neglected
. I
agree
with this statement to great extent and will discuss in the upcoming paragraphs.

To commence with, there are several reasons behind this happening.
First
and foremost, develop countries has a wide range of industrialization area which
are created
by clearing a large part of the
forests
area
therefore
, this is
directly
effect
on not
only
climate
but
also
effect
on wildlife.
Secondly
, industries and other factories
use
the harmful and cheapest toxic during the manufacturers in order to become richer in early time. During few years, the large number of dead fishes are
being declined
around the world
because
the wastage put into the rivers and oceans which is
emissioned
by
foctories


In contrast
, despite the agreement of this, there are
also
some
factors which support that environment damage caused not
mainly
by developing nations it can be
seen
that pollution and environmental problems has prominent factors in
some
poor countries.
For instance
, according the recent research, a few
garmants
factories in the Bangladesh, cause far more damage to the air
as well
as water than hundreds of bigger industries in the United States.

To conclude
, although it is the problematic
effect
in all over the universe, it is not
only
created by richer nation, there are
also
numerous poor nation which
also
play vital role in the damaging of the environmental problems.
we
still
have time and
lot of
option to
reduce
adverse effects.
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IELTS essay Pollution and other environmental problems are resulting from a country's developing and becoming richer. Some think this cannot be avoided.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
254 words
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