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Please work in group and show your own ideas on what you have learnt from this course.

Please work in group and show your own ideas on what you have learnt from this course. eEYpW
From this course, I have learned the concept of engineering industry, branches of engineering. The major forces and movements in engineering. Besides, I also learned the types of machine and the construction of them. The capacity of each machine and the parameter necessary. Additionally, I found out about machining methods and how to use fixtures or tool holders to support works. Last but not least, I was training about safety and the way organized works effective
From this course, I have learned the concept of engineering industry, branches of engineering. The major forces and movements in engineering.
Besides
, I
also
learned the types of machine and the construction of them. The capacity of each machine and the parameter necessary.
Additionally
, I found out about machining methods and how to
use
fixtures or tool holders to support works. Last
but
not least, I was training about safety and the way organized works
effective
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IELTS essay Please work in group and show your own ideas on what you have learnt from this course.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
75 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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