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Artists require the freedom of expression to some extent to develop innovative ideas. Some people argue that full freedom to express any opinion or ideas need to be given to artists. In my opinion, artists should be given enough freedom to express their ideas but total freedom is not required. Artists should have the liberty to express their views and original ideas without having to worry about the consequences. When they have the freedom to express, more and more people will turn to arts and this will enrich our culture and civilisation. Moreover, many artists highlight several social issues and they spread awareness among the masses. Many of them stand for social justice. After a rape case of an 8 year old girl in India, many people expressed their anger and emotions through songs and these songs became viral on social media. Thus it aroused feelings of many people and the authorities were forced to take immediate action against the criminals. However, the art works should not have any destructive impact on the society. There have been several incidences where artworks like paintings created tension and violence. For example M F Hussain’s paintings of nude Indian Goddesses created chaos among Hindu people. In addition to this, objectifying women in various art works may negatively influence children and teenagers. They may see women as mere objects of lust and fail to respect them. In other words, creating negative emotions through art increases the crime and
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Artists should have the liberty to
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their views and original
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, more and more
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will turn to
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and this will enrich our culture and
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issues and
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of them stand for social justice. After a rape case of an 8 year
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girl in India,
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expressed their anger and emotions through songs and these songs became viral on social media.
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it aroused feelings of
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and the authorities
were forced
to take immediate action against the criminals.

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, the
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art
works should not have any destructive impact on the society. There have been several incidences where artworks like paintings created tension and violence.
For example
M F Hussain’s paintings of nude Indian Goddesses created chaos among Hindu
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people
.
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to this, objectifying women in various
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art
works may
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influence children and
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teenagers
. They may
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women as mere objects of lust and fail to respect them.
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, creating
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negative
emotions through
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art
increases the crime
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IELTS essay Please take care and do the needful and if you want to do speaking please come on line

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
243 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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