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Please explain your tuition response (above). We encourage you to share as much information as possible about what you and/or your family could or could not contribute and why.

Please explain your tuition response (above). We encourage you to share as much information as possible about what you and/or your family could or could not contribute and why. xPEj9
Coming from an African country that recently raged war on its Northern territory and with the Covid 19 pandemic still going on, the economy is looking really bad. And due to the regulations of the state of emergency law eventually harm the import/export markets which in turn drives up prices on all items. My family has four kids who also require school fees, mortgage payment, and ~40% tax to the government from the total gross salary which will make it difficult for us to cover additional costs.
Coming from an African country that recently raged war on its
If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.
Northern territory
and with the
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
Covid 19
pandemic
still
going on, the economy is looking
really
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bad
. And due to the regulations of the state of emergency law
eventually
harm the import/export markets which in turn drives up prices on all items. My family has four kids who
also
require school fees, mortgage payment, and ~40% tax to the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
from the total gross salary which will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
it difficult for us to cover additional costs.
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IELTS essay Please explain your tuition response (above). We encourage you to share as much information as possible about what you and/or your family could or could not contribute and why.

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1 paragraphs
87 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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