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Planting trees is very important for the environment. Some people says trees should be planted in the vacant areas of cities and towns, while other says housing facilities should be built instead. Do you agree or disagree?

Planting trees is very important for the environment. Some people says trees should be planted in the vacant areas of cities and towns, while other says housing facilities should be built instead. xkD6
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is an enormous field that
is required
to
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sending
the
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message
to the other planets intelligent life creatures is one of solutions that ought to
be done
by scientists. This reason for this attitude is that by
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sending
a
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message
that could
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creatures, we have taken an effort of
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examination and
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insight for helping him to enlarge his research.

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will restrict
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theirself
in exploring
further
knowledge beyond their limit. This is to say that, exploring
further
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space
occupations could drive a
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dengerous
effect that would harm the majority of world inhabitants, while it could
be limited
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space
experts to explore more regarding what would
be understood
beyond our earth.

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further
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space
while retaining
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insecureness
could lead a restriction of knowledge that would limit the
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science.
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IELTS essay Planting trees is very important for the environment. Some people says trees should be planted in the vacant areas of cities and towns, while other says housing facilities should be built instead.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
341 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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