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Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex stressful. What is your opinion? use spesific reasons and examples to support oyur answers.

Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex stressful. What is your opinion? use spesific reasons and examples to support oyur answers. LRG3
Nowadays, the internet improves every day. Not only internet has improves every day. Now the technology has sophisticated and diverse. Technology has been made to make human work easier. On of them are computers. Computers have been made live easier and more convenient for many people. Conversely, other people say that computers have been made life more complex and stressful. There are two sides to debated, and I would like to focus firstly on the first statement that the commputers have been made live easier. I agree with this statement. A lot of benefits of having a computer. First, we can more easier to write something without using a pen and we just need to typing. Secondly, we cam more convenient for work or study. For example, todays cause of pandemic covid-19 taht many people should to work from home or study at home online and by having a computer we can more easier to work or study. Taking a look now at the second point of view of some people say that computers have been made life more complex and stressful. I'm also agree with this statement because if we use the computer excessively it can be get the situation like this statement. There is several reasons why some people say that statement. Fistly, they are working on the computer for a longtime and it can make stressful. Secondly, they are who live in a busy environment with their computers. There is not good from mental health or their bodies. In conclusion, we must be able to balance the time if we use the computer. My opinion about both statements are it depends on yourself to use the computer. It can be more useful if we put to good use and it can be more complex if we were used exaggerated.
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improves
every day. Not
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only
internet has
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improves
every day.
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Now
the technology has sophisticated and diverse. Technology has
been made
to
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make
human
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work
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easier
. On of them are computers. Computers have
been made
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live
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easier
and more convenient for
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many
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people
.
Conversely
, other
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people
say that computers have
been made
life more complex and stressful. There are two sides to debated, and I would like to focus
firstly
on the
first
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statement
that the
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commputers
have
been made
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live
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easier
. I
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agree
with this
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statement
.
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A lot of
benefits of having a computer.
First
, we can more
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easier
to write something without using a
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pen and
we
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just
need to typing.
Secondly
, we
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cam
more convenient for
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work
or study.
For example
,
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todays
cause of pandemic
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covid-19
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taht
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many
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people
should to
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work
from home or study at home online and by having a computer we can more
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easier
to
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work
or study.

Taking a look
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now
at the second point of view of
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some
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people
say that computers have
been made
life more complex and stressful. I'm
also
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agree
with this
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statement
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because
if we
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use
the computer
excessively
it can be
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get
the situation like this
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statement
. There is several reasons why
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some
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people
say that
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statement
.
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Fistly
, they are working on the computer for a longtime and it can
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make
stressful.
Secondly
, they are who
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live
in a busy environment with their computers. There is not
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good
from mental health or their bodies.

In conclusion
, we
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must
be able to balance the time if we
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use
the computer. My opinion about both
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statements
are it depends on yourself to
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use
the computer. It can be more useful if we put to
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good
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use
and it can be more complex if we were
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used
exaggerated.

IELTS essay Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex stressful. What is your opinion? use spesific reasons and examples to support oyur answers.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
302 words
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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