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Plagiarism in academics has become a pressing problem in many countries today What are the causes of this problem What are some possible solutions v.1

Plagiarism in academics has become a pressing problem in many countries today What are the causes of this problem What are some possible solutions v. 1
It goes without saying committing crimes deserves punishment, and sending to prison is an efficient way to prevent nefarious acts and depravity from rising. Therefore, people are divided in their opinions regarding the solutions to cope with criminals. Whether the claims of jail are the perfect place criminals belong or there are nicer methods should be involved has sparked a heated debate. From my perspective, I strongly opine that putting villainous people in jail really does community good, however, being creative in cheating these people can open some other ways to make villains contribute to society. To begin with, sending criminals into exile is a method which has been utilized in the past to discover neglected land as well as changing these lands into usable place for agriculture. In fact, in the past, an act of sending prisoners to Australia from United Kingdom cites a great example here. After just 50 years, the whole continent has become England’s colony and supported England with food and resources despite the fact that Australia soon separated from the UK and started their own government. This example, showed that putting people in jail is not the best solution as they have the strength and power to work and manufacture as long as they are under the government’s control. Apart from that, although jailing makes people with ignominious acts understand the necessity of freedom and their own wrongdoings, it is not always suitable for every subject. For instance, culpable people with good behaviour and characteristics had to commit crimes like stealing due to their poor circumstances. Their backgrounds pushed them to do what they felt appalling or even manipulated them. These cases deserve a decrease in the level of punishment while still keeping them under control by sending them to work in factories or do the job with a low number of workers. To reiterate, putting criminals in prison is not appropriate in some situations while prisoners going into exile might be a great way. Jailing has proved its efficiency, however, in accordance to these reasons, there are methods in changing and improving ways of punishing.
It goes without saying committing crimes deserves punishment, and
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sending
to prison is an efficient
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way
to
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prevent
nefarious acts and depravity from rising.
Therefore
,
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people
are divided
in their opinions regarding the solutions to cope with
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criminals
. Whether the claims of jail are the perfect place
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criminals
belong or there are nicer methods should
be involved
has sparked a heated debate. From my perspective, I
strongly
opine that putting villainous
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people
in jail
really
does community
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good
,
however
, being creative in cheating these
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people
can open
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some
other
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ways
to
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make
villains contribute to society.

To
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begin
with,
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sending
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criminals
into exile is a method which has
been utilized
in the past to discover neglected land
as well
as changing these lands into usable place for agriculture. In fact, in the past, an act of
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sending
prisoners to Australia
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from United Kingdom
cites a great example here. After
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just
50 years, the whole continent has become England’s colony and supported England with food and resources despite the fact that Australia
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soon
separated from the UK and
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started
their
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own
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government
. This example,
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showed
that putting
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people
in jail is not the best solution as they have the strength and power to work and manufacture as long as they are under the
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government
’s control.

Apart from that, although jailing
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makes
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people
with ignominious acts understand the necessity of freedom and their
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own
wrongdoings, it is not always suitable for every subject.
For instance
, culpable
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people
with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
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behaviour
and characteristics had to commit crimes like stealing due to their poor circumstances. Their backgrounds pushed them to do what they felt appalling or even manipulated them. These cases deserve a decrease in the level of punishment while
still
keeping them under control by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sending
them to work in factories or do the job with a low number of workers.

To reiterate, putting
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criminals
in prison is not appropriate in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
situations while prisoners going into exile might be a great
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way
. Jailing has proved its efficiency,
however
, in accordance to these reasons, there are methods in changing and improving
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ways
of punishing.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Plagiarism in academics has become a pressing problem in many countries today What are the causes of this problem What are some possible solutions v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
351 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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