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narrative paragraph about important changes in your life. As you prepare your paragraph, think about the Unit Question, "How are children and adults different?" Choose one of the topics below for your paragraph: 1. Write a paragraph about 3-5 important changes in your life in the past 5 to 10 years. How is your life different now than it was 10 years ago?

narrative paragraph about important changes in your life. As you prepare your paragraph, think about the Unit Question, "How are children and adults different? " Choose one of the topics below for your paragraph: 1. Write a paragraph about 3-5 important changes in your life in the past 5 to 10 years. How is your life different now than it was 10 years ago? AjrEX
narrative paragraph about important changes in your life. As you prepare your paragraph, think about the Unit Question, "How are children and adults different? " Choose one of the topics below for your paragraph: 1. Write a paragraph about 3-5 important changes in your life in the past 5 to 10 years. How is your life different now than it was 10 years ago?
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IELTS essay narrative paragraph about important changes in your life. As you prepare your paragraph, think about the Unit Question, "How are children and adults different? " Choose one of the topics below for your paragraph: 1. Write a paragraph about 3-5 important changes in your life in the past 5 to 10 years. How is your life different now than it was 10 years ago?

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  American English
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64 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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