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Influența ființelor umane asupra ecosistemului lumii este leasingul la dispariția speciilor și pierderea biodiversității. Care sunt cauzele principale ale pierderii biodiversității? Ce soluții puteți sugera?

Influența ființelor umane asupra ecosistemului lumii este leasingul la dispariția speciilor și pierderea biodiversității. Care sunt cauzele principale ale pierderii biodiversității? Ce soluții puteți sugera? aw7bG
Human activities have a huge impact on ecosystem's fauna and flora, namely leading to declining species. This essay will discuss the main causes of species' extinction, including change of the natural habitat and pollution. This essay will also suggest solutions to these problems, including protect areas and promote awareness a huge impact on ecosystem's fauna and flora, namely, leading to declining species. This essay will discuss the main causes of species' extinction, including change of the natural habitat and pollution. This essay will also suggest solutions to these problems, including protect areas and promote awareness.
Human activities have a huge impact on ecosystem's fauna and flora,
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leading to declining species.

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will discuss the main causes of species' extinction, including
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of the natural habitat and pollution. This
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suggest solutions to these problems, including protect areas and promote awareness a huge impact on ecosystem's fauna and flora,
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, leading to declining species.

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This
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will discuss the main causes of species' extinction, including
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
of the natural habitat and pollution.
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will
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suggest solutions to these problems, including protect areas and promote awareness.
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IELTS essay Influența ființelor umane asupra ecosistemului lumii este leasingul la dispariția speciilor și pierderea biodiversității. Care sunt cauzele principale ale pierderii biodiversității? Ce soluții puteți sugera?

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95 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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