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People should never eat foods and ready-made meals that contain preservatives and chemicals. Do you agree?

People should never eat foods and ready-made meals that contain preservatives and chemicals. Do you agree? g5kD1
Preservatives and chemicals foods are not good for our health, in my opnion Im agree with this term beacuase I think people have to eat healthy food to have a good life, also this can help you to have a goood digestive system, If you want to be a fit person also you have firt to read how is made the food we are eating, beacuase I think most of the people dont read the percent of chemicals and preservatives that are in our food, so we most see that to buy the food we are eating.
Preservatives and chemicals
foods
are not
good
for our health, in my
opnion
Im
agree
with this term
beacuase
I
think
people
have to
eat healthy
food
to have a
good
life,
also
this can
help
you to have a
goood
digestive system, If you want to be a fit person
also
you have
firt
to read how
is made
the
food
we are eating,
beacuase
I
think
most of the
people
dont
read the percent of chemicals and preservatives that are in our
food
,
so
we most
see
that to
buy
the
food
we are eating.
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IELTS essay People should never eat foods and ready-made meals that contain preservatives and chemicals. Do you agree?

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  American English
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