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People should follow the customs and tradition when people start to live in new country to what agree disagree.

Unlike the past, when people are not far behind to going a new place at present people are very excited for going to new country and places. Whether people are followed the new tradition for live. I'm partial agree with people should follow custom and tradition. Different factor have influence my stand in this matter. Out of the several obervation the first which come to my mind is that people live alone and enjoy for natural environment life. This view exit because people are going to good place to clean and tide. As results out of country people are respected even behave is good. Moreover, everyone notice that people are tranding and custom ne items and people are follow the trand. This factor is taken into account people always fulfill life so many time not good things fir own place. Therefore, India is high population country but people are low respected with nature. In foreable future people are away to tranding and custom.
Unlike the past, when
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people
are not far behind to going a new
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place
at present
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people
are
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very
excited for going to new country and
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places
. Whether
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people
are followed
the new tradition for
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live
. I'm partial
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agree
with
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people
should follow custom and tradition.
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Different
factor have influence my stand in this matter. Out of the several
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obervation
the
first
which
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come
to my mind is that
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people
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live
alone and enjoy for natural environment life. This view exit
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because
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people
are going to
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good
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place
to clean and tide.
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As
results out of country
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people
are respected
even behave is
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good
.
Moreover
, everyone
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notice
that
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people
are
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tranding
and custom
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ne
items and
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people
are follow the
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trand
. This factor
is taken
into account
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people
always fulfill life
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so
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many time
not
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good
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things
fir
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own
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place
.
Therefore
, India is high population
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country
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but
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people
are low respected with nature.

In
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future
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people
are away to
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tranding
and custom.

IELTS essay People should follow the customs and tradition when people start to live in new country to what agree disagree.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
163 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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