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people should be obligatory to travel by bicycle rather than by car for short distance of trips

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These days, people should be obligatory to travel by bicycle rather than by car for short distance of trips. I agree with this statement due to the fact people must be more careful about our environment. Firstly, the most problem is that autos and other transports strongly clog out air as a result population have problems with their health. For example, lung cancer, stroke. The solution can be is that workers should choose a work place which will be near with their accommodations. On another hand, people can live in the center of the city, where they will find a work not far from their houses. The second problem of using cars are traffic jams. People should use a governments transport such as subway, buses, bikes or taxis. As a result, in spite of a numerous car which traveling on the road every day, accidents and traffic jams have been reduced. In conclusion, I believe that humanity will follow to the rule ang the number of vehicles on the roads will decrease.

These days, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 should be obligatory to travel by bicycle rather
 than by car for short distance of trips. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with this statement due to the fact You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 be more careful about our environment.

Firstly
, the most problem is that autos and other transports strongly
 clog out air as a result
 population have problems with their health. For example
, lung cancer, stroke. The solution can be is that workers should choose a work place which will be near with their accommodations. On another hand, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in the center of the city, where they will find a work not far from their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
. The second problem of using cars are traffic jams. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
People
 should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritiespublic authorities
governments
 transport such as subway, buses, bikes or taxis. As a result
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:notwithstanding
in spite of
 a numerous car which traveling on the road every day, accidents and traffic jams have been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
.

In conclusion
, I believe that humanity will follow to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirement
rule
 ang the number of vehicles on the roads will decrease. 