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Internet and mobile phones have become an indispensable part of students life.Is it positive or negative development. Discuss in detail with examples.

Internet and mobile phones have become an indispensable part of students life. Is it positive or negative development. Discuss in detail with examples. RR7AV
Nowadays, Internet networks and Smartphones play and vital role in pupils life which have both pros and cons but it effects can be measured with how student use in their daily routine. To embark with some benefits of internet and mobile phones on people lives. In Modern era the world is now changing into a technological world with give several advantages. Through internet mobile phones become advance and it easy to access internet on mobile phones. There are amole of mobile applications which hepls students in many ways like calculator which calculate the numbers in a second whereas, Scholars also update their daily knowledge through electronic news. Students use different type of software which develop their brain and sharp their memory ability. To exemplify, in COVID-19 pandemic the whole Nation was in a state of lockdown. All schools and colleges were also closed. So teacher taught pupils through online mobile application which run through internet and save the student two years education. On the other hand cell phones and network also have drawbacks on student life. On mobile phone there are ample of online games which adversely affect the Pupils daily schedule students also get addicted with these games like pubg, blue whale and so on because of their graphics or reward which they get while playing. Student playing these games without break for a long hours rather than focus on studies. affect the pupils brain, To illustrate, in India in the year 2020 government Ban the pubg mobile because of parents complain and children invest lakh rupees on pubg game which runied their lives and at the end many of them commit suicide. To conclude, that internet network and cell phones become beneficial for student as well as for other if they use this in a right ways and not get dependent on mobile phones otherwise, overuse of anything badly affect psychologically and physiologically.
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pupils
life which have both pros and cons
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but
it effects can
be measured
with how
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student
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use
in their daily routine.

To embark with
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some
benefits of internet and mobile
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phones
on
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people
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lives
. In Modern era the world is
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now
changing into a technological world with give several advantages.
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Through
internet mobile
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phones
become advance and
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it
easy to access internet on mobile
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phones
. There are
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amole
of mobile applications which
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hepls
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students
in
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many
ways like calculator which calculate the numbers in a second whereas, Scholars
also
update their daily knowledge
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through
electronic news.
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Students
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use
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different
type of software which develop their brain and sharp their memory ability. To exemplify, in COVID-19 pandemic the whole Nation was in a state of lockdown. All schools and colleges were
also
closed.
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So
teacher taught
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pupils
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through
online mobile application which run
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through
internet and save the
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student
two years education.

On the other hand
cell
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phones
and network
also
have drawbacks on
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student
life. On mobile
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phone
there are ample of online
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games
which
adversely
affect the
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Pupils
daily schedule
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students
also
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get
addicted with these
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games
like
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pubg
, blue whale and
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so
on
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because
of their graphics or reward which they
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get
while playing.
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Student
playing these
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games
without break for a long
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hours
rather
than focus on studies.
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affect
the
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pupils
brain, To illustrate, in India in the year 2020
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government
Ban the
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pubg
mobile
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because
of parents complain and children invest lakh rupees on
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pubg
game which
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runied
their
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lives
and at the
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end
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many
of them commit suicide.
To conclude
, that internet network and cell
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phones
become beneficial for
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student
as well
as for other if they
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use
this in a right ways and not
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get
dependent on mobile
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
phones
otherwise
, overuse of anything
badly
affect
psychologically
and
physiologically
.
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IELTS essay Internet and mobile phones have become an indispensable part of students life. Is it positive or negative development. Discuss in detail with examples.

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