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people say that during a pandemic, the national economy should be prioritized over the general healthcare

people say that during a pandemic, the national economy should be prioritized over the general healthcare eAB3B
Covid 19 has exerted detrimental influences on human life. In such a context, public opinions have been polarized regarding the national priority, whether it is economic growth or general healthcare. From my perspective, I am firmly in favour of the idea that the general healthcare should be the first priority. On the one hand, such claims are made to support the importance of economy. To, the economy allows sustainability among the society. During the pandemic, the economy was driven into deep and damaging recession due to the continual lockdown and the supply chain eruption. As a consequence, this trend poses a threat to various citizens' life as their finance condition can not adapt for the consumption needs. Therefore, even when the epidemic puts the public health at risk, the economy should be endured not only to ensure the imperative needs but also alleviate the country's burden in supporting the citizens. However, in an attempt to maitain a sustainable development as well as a healthy society, I strongly into the statement that general health be put in serious concern. As a common knowledge, covid 19 imperils our health or even our life. Since scientists and doctors have been endevouring to fight against the diseases, it is recommended that government force their residents to stay at home to be safe, not only for themselves but also for the others. Even when it can be classed as the main reason for increasing poverty, this is a worthful trade-off because our health is greatly protected. It may take a long time for the economy to recover after a period, but significantly health can not be taken back. To conclude, I have a belief that general health is the most crucial element in each and every aspects of life, concluding the economy. Therefore, if only the economy is on the highlight, the country is unlikely to develop sustainably
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
Covid 19
has exerted detrimental influences on human
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
. In such a context, public opinions have
been polarized
regarding the national priority, whether it is economic growth or general healthcare. From my perspective, I am
firmly
in
Possible spelling mistake. 'favour' is British English.
favour
of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
that the general healthcare should be the
first
priority.

On the one hand, such claims
are made
to support the importance of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
economy
. To, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
economy
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allows
sustainability among the society. During the pandemic, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
economy
was driven
into deep and damaging recession due to the continual lockdown and the supply chain eruption. As a consequence, this trend poses a threat to various citizens'
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
as their finance condition can not adapt for the consumption needs.
Therefore
, even when the epidemic puts the public
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
health
at
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
risk
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
economy
should
be endured
not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
to ensure the imperative needs
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
alleviate the country's burden in supporting the citizens.

However
, in an attempt to
Possible spelling mistake found.
maitain
a sustainable development
as well
as a healthy society, I
strongly
into the statement that general
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
health
be put
in serious concern. As a common knowledge,
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
covid 19
imperils our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
health
or even our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
. Since scientists and doctors have been
Possible spelling mistake found.
endevouring
to fight against the diseases, it
is recommended
that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
force their residents to stay at home to be safe, not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
for themselves
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
for the others. Even when it can
be classed
as the main reason for increasing poverty, this is a
Possible spelling mistake found.
worthful
trade-off
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
health
is
greatly
protected. It may take a long time for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
economy
to recover after a period,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
significantly
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
health
can not
be taken
back.

To conclude
, I have a belief that general
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
health
is the most crucial element in each and every
The noun should be probably in the singular form: "aspect"?
aspects
of
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life
, concluding the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
economy
.
Therefore
, if
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
economy
is on the highlight, the country is unlikely to develop
sustainably
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IELTS essay people say that during a pandemic, the national economy should be prioritized over the general healthcare

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
312 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
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