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People nowadays work hard to buy more things. This has made our lives generally more comfortable, but many traditional values and customs have been lost and this is a pity. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People nowadays work hard to buy more things. This has made our lives generally more comfortable, but many traditional values and customs have been lost and this is a pity. G70m

The predominant justification of my view point is that in these days most of person spend much time in their job profession. This is because they want to earn more money and full fill their all desires such as a bungalow, expensive cars and latest gizmos. Moreover, mankind also believes to have a number of business alternatives with a view to earning more profit from different sources. For instance, In this era some of the youngsters leave no stone unturned to buy the latest smartphone also they are leaving distance from their families.

The predominant justification of my view point is that in these days Consider using "most person" or "most of the person".most personmost of the person
most of person
 spend much time in their job profession. This is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they want to earn more money and full fill their all desires such as a bungalow, expensive cars and latest gizmos. Moreover
, mankind also
 believes to have a number of business alternatives with a view to earning more profit from This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 sources. For instance
, In this era If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?some
some of the
 youngsters This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 no stone unturned to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 the latest smartphone also
 they are leaving distance from their families. 