Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example. Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.

People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example. Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse. QA31
In today's society usage of drugs for both therapeutic and recreational purposes has reached very high rates compared to previous decades. The drug culture exists on earth from the beginning of civilizations, most of the drugs which are labelled as harmful to humans now was used for treatment of some diseases due to lack of knowledge though we know the drugs are harmful to our organs we still indulge not knowing the consequences. The youth today are vulnerable to drugs than previous generations due to increasing academic pressures and some other contributibg factors like bad group of friends, peer pressure, starting to use drugs for fun, lack of parental guidance and monitoring on children about there wereabouts and attractive commercials and public figures propagating the use of drugs legal or illegal for there own self fulfilling purposes which is leading to young children and adults falling in the trap. The effects of the usage of drugs in longterm is alarming ranging from financial problems to major health risks. Majority of adults who start using drugs at an young age leads to severe cognition problems, psychiatric illnesses like schizophrenia, parkinsons, dementia and it may also lead to heart attack, sudden breathlesness. In case of sudden cardiac and respiratory problems encountred from high drug dosage usually lead to death. The widespread drug abuse is leading to many problems and bad effects on youth. So it is important to make some guidelines and implement laws to forbid drug abuse. The governement can implement guidelines for universities to make a rule where every student should undergo a blood test every 3 months to know if he is not using illegal drugs which may have huge impact, awarness programes can be launched by private organizations and individuals to help educate people, free medication can be distributed by healthcare centers for people who are undergoing drug rehabilitation, drug rehabilitation centres can be increased in areas of heavy drug abuse to curtail the side effects. Finally, by the combined efforts of government and public we can save youth and adults from drug abuse in a systematic manner.
In
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
's society usage of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drugs
for both therapeutic and recreational purposes has reached
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
high rates compared to previous decades. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drug
culture exists on earth from the beginning of civilizations, most of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drugs
which
are labelled
as harmful to humans
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
for treatment of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
diseases due to lack of knowledge though we know the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drugs
are harmful to our organs we
still
indulge not knowing the consequences.

The youth
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
are vulnerable to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drugs
than previous generations due to increasing academic pressures and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
other
Possible spelling mistake found.
contributibg
factors like
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
group of friends, peer pressure, starting to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drugs
for fun, lack of parental guidance and monitoring on children about there
Possible spelling mistake found.
wereabouts
and attractive commercials and public figures propagating the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drugs
legal or illegal for there
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
self fulfilling
purposes which is leading to young children and adults falling in the trap.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
effects of the usage of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drugs
in
Possible spelling mistake found.
longterm
is alarming ranging from financial
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problems
to major health
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
risks
. Majority of adults who
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
using
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drugs
at
Use "a" instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
an
young age leads to severe cognition
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problems
, psychiatric illnesses like schizophrenia,
Possible spelling mistake found.
parkinsons
, dementia and it may
also
lead to heart attack, sudden
Possible spelling mistake found.
breathlesness
. In case of sudden cardiac and respiratory
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problems
Possible spelling mistake found.
encountred
from high
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drug
dosage
usually
lead to death.

The widespread
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drug
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
abuse
is leading to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
problems
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
effects on youth.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
it is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
guidelines and implement laws to forbid
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drug
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
abuse
. The
Possible spelling mistake found.
governement
can implement guidelines for universities to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rule
where every student should undergo a blood
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
test
every 3 months to know if he is not using illegal
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drugs
which may have huge impact,
Possible spelling mistake found.
awarness
Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "programs", the plural form of the noun 'program'?
programes
can
be launched
by private organizations and individuals to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
educate
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
, free medication can
be distributed
by healthcare centers for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
who are undergoing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drug
rehabilitation,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drug
rehabilitation
Possible spelling mistake. 'centres' is British English.
centres
can
be increased
in areas of heavy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drug
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
abuse
to curtail the side effects.

Finally
, by the combined efforts of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
and public we can save youth and adults from
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
drug
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
abuse
Consider replacing "in a systematic manner" with the adverb for "systematic"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a systematic manner
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example. Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
350 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts