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Write about the following topic. Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 3lql

Yes, computer has negative impacts more than positive ones. I completely agree with the statement. Sitting all day in front of the computer not only affect eyes but it also has physical impacts on the children. While using computer for long hours, children often forget to get up and this has negative impact on their body. Use of Computer is the most common reason for increasing obesity in the children. Children spend hours and hours on the computer, either to stidy or play games etc. which results in less physical activity causing eye strain, back pain, obesity etc. Due to the Covid-19 pandemic, schools have opted for online teaching method which again will result in increased used of computer. As teaching has gone completely online, students have to sit for long hours in front of computer. Most of the childrens eyes got affected due to this and they now have to wear spectatcles. When childrens use to go to school, they has a lot of physicl activities, e. g. during the breaktime they use to play games etc. but due to this online teaching now even when they get a break they play games on computer itself. they don't want to get up and be away from computer. This is affecting the new generation very badly as Obesity is increasing day by day. Computer is making childrens forget In Person Communication. They are getting use to vitual learning, virtual exams, virtual tasks, this is going to be a great hindrance to their physical well being and sometimes mental well being too.

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negative
 impacts more than This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 ones. I completely This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
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only
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but
 it also
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children
. While using computer for long You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointflashjuncturetimedateoccasion
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often
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get
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negative
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Use
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stidy
 or play games etc. which results in less physical activity causing eye strain, back pain, obesity etc.

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used
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have to
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hours
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childrens
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got
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affected
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this and
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now
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have to
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spectatcles
. When Possible spelling mistake found.children
childrens
Make sure that 'use to' is correct. For habitual actions in the past or to mean 'accustomed to', use "used to".used to
use to
 go to school, they The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: "have", "haven"havehaven
has
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a lot of
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physicl
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e. g.
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breaktime
 they Make sure that 'use to' is correct. For habitual actions in the past or to mean 'accustomed to', use "used to".used to
use to
 play games etc. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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now
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get
 a break they play games on computer itself. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThey
they
 don't want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 up and be away from computer. This is affecting the new generation This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
badly
 as Obesity is increasing day by day.

Computer is making Possible spelling mistake found.children
childrens
 forget In Person Communication. They are getting This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 to Possible spelling mistake found.visualritualvirtualvitalvictual
vitual
 learning, virtual exams, virtual tasks, this is going to be a great hindrance to their physical This word is normally spelled with hyphen.well-being
well being
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 mental This word is normally spelled with hyphen.well-being
well being
 too. 