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People have to spend more and more time to travel from their homes for jobs and study .reasons and solutions.

Owing to jobs and study purposes individuals have plethora of time invest on travel from their homes. This essay will not only highlight the problem associated with this issue but also present some potential measures to resolve it. To plunge into, there are myriad of reasons to shore light upon the given proclivity. Discussing the first view, the most intrinsic one is that traffic. To justify, nowadays multitudes mostly prefer to own automobiles which provide plethora of facilities of masses. Due to that reason people give preference to private motors than public transport because with the help of own vehicles they are easily go their workplace. Consequently number of automobiles which are available on roads. Hence, human's face a number of obstacles

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 potential measures to resolve it.

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