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People have to spend more and more time to travel from their homes for jobs and study .reasons and solutions.

Owing to jobs and study purposes individuals have plethora of time invest on travel from their homes. This essay will not only highlight the problem associated with this issue but also present some potential measures to resolve it. To plunge into, there are myriad of reasons to shore light upon the given proclivity. Discussing the first view, the most intrinsic one is that traffic. To justify, nowadays multitudes mostly prefer to own automobiles which provide plethora of facilities of masses. Due to that reason people give preference to private motors than public transport because with the help of own vehicles they are easily go their workplace. Consequently number of automobiles which are available on roads. Hence, human's face a number of obstacles
Owing to jobs and study purposes individuals have plethora of time invest on travel from their homes. This essay will not
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potential measures to resolve it.

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proclivity. Discussing the
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view, the most intrinsic one is that traffic. To justify, nowadays multitudes
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own
automobiles which provide plethora of facilities of masses. Due to that reason
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people
give preference to private motors than public transport
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help
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vehicles they are
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their workplace.
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number of automobiles which are available on roads.
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, human's face a number of obstacles
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IELTS essay People have to spend more and more time to travel from their homes for jobs and study. reasons and solutions.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
121 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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