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people argue that it is impossible for developing countries to further develop without damaging the environment.

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Some people argue that it is impossible for developing countries to further develop without damaging the environment. In their opinion, economic growth should be the first priority of the government. I do not agree with this view. In my opinion, economic growth is important but it cannot be at the expense of the environment. When nations develop, they will require more resources. For example, developing countries like India and China need more fuel to power their growth. Excessive consumption of fossil fuels, unfortunately, leads to the emission of carbon dioxide and accelerates the rate of global warming. This, however, does not mean that these countries should be allowed to pollute for the sake of their development. Of course, they need to develop but the need of the hour is the development o
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argue that it is impossible for
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developing countries
to
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develop without damaging the environment. In their opinion, economic growth should be the
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important
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it cannot be at the expense of the environment.

When nations develop, they will require more resources.
For example
,
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developing countries
like India and China need more fuel to power their growth. Excessive consumption of fossil fuels, unfortunately, leads to the emission of carbon dioxide and accelerates the rate of global warming. This,
however
, does not mean that these countries should be
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allowed
to pollute for the sake of their development.
Of course
, they need to develop
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but
the need of the hour is the development
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IELTS essay people argue that it is impossible for developing countries to further develop without damaging the environment.

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  American English
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