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People are increasingly becoming overweighted in recent times What factors do you think are responsible. How can this be addressed

People are increasingly becoming overweighted in recent times What factors do you think are responsible. How can this be addressed 2bxnk
The rate at which individuals are predisposed to adding too much fat is on a rise of late. Several human practice and way of life are the cause: such as our eating habits, exercise pattern, diet, inactivity and also genetics. Lifestyle changes and modifications on what people consume can help reduce this burden.
The rate at which individuals
are predisposed
to adding too much
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fat
is on a rise of late. Several human practice and way of life are the cause: such as our eating habits, exercise pattern, diet, inactivity and
also
genetics. Lifestyle
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
and modifications on what
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people
consume can
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help
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reduce
this burden.
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IELTS essay People are increasingly becoming overweighted in recent times What factors do you think are responsible. How can this be addressed

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