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It is true that people are getting dependent on each other because in this modern world people needs support from at least from a person with same thoughts and mutual understanding to grow fast in their life and become independent with a competitive support. Nowadays, people are weak at decision making for their upcoming future and they need to have a right suggestion among all the suggested fields, so at that time being dependent on the person with the same thinking and mutual understanding will guide you to choose according to your thought level and with a great support. For instance, there was a group of boys having great debate on the career among all of them two boys were like they don't want to share their goals for life and are not in a habit to be dependent on anybody, he use to choose different among all and won't support or help others, as they both are narcissist. After two years whole group was settled abroad except the two boys, as whole group was having mental support of each other and made everything possible by helping each others with a positive attitude because in this era of modern times people cant grew by themselves as the support, motivation, positive energy should be along with, to grew more faster as working hard individually with a single brain without any positive competitor along with motivated energy. Last but not the least we concluded that dependency on right person at a right time will help you to grow faster as being alone, we are talking on a positive side, sometimes people misuse the support or build a wrong habit of spoon feeding, people start being lazy and dependent on the particular person. People should be dependent at the time of confusion in any decision making or to do a task, which is out of our thinking ability he /she should not be dependent or the things which you know that you can do it by your own easily.

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understanding to grow
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decision making
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thought
 level and with a great support.

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, there was a group of boys having great debate on the career among all of them two boys were like they don't want to share their goals for life and are not in a habit to be You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpoordefenselessvulnerablereliant
dependent
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use to
 choose This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 among all and won't You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbacking
support
 or This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 others, as they both are narcissist.

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support
 of each You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
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others
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positive
 attitude This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 in this era of modern You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
times
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 cant grew by themselves as the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbacking
support
, motivation, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspecificconfidentdecisiveclearconclusive
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 energy should be along with, to grew Use only "faster" (without 'more') when you use the comparative.faster
more faster
 as working This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
individually
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positive
 competitor along with motivated energy.

Last This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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person
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time
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help
 you to grow faster as being alone, we are talking on a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspecificconfidentdecisiveclearconclusive
positive
 side, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
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people
 misuse the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbacking
support
 or build a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:incorrect
wrong
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spoon feeding
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people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 being lazy and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpoordefenselessvulnerablereliant
dependent
 on the particular You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcustomerbodylifewomansomebodycharacter
person
. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
People
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dependent
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time
 of confusion in any This word is normally spelled with hyphen.decision-making
decision making
 or to do a task, which is out of our thinking ability he /she should not be You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpoordefenselessvulnerablereliant
dependent
 or the things which you know that you can do it by your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
easily
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