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Participating in team sports can help young people to acquire skills that are useful for the workplace. Therefore, team sports should be prioritized ahead of individual sports in schools. Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with this statement.

Participating in team sports can help young people to acquire skills that are useful for the workplace. Therefore, team sports should be prioritized ahead of individual sports in schools. Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with this statement. aJ95o

Sports in general are beneficial for the people at all ages at all levels. However, team sports, in particular, have additional advantages that should be encouraged from schools. From one side, living in a more collaborative environment imposes us to believe that the team work spirit becomes a must and should be acquired throughout numerous stages in our lives. For this reason, team sports like football and basketball can be one of the ways that help youth generation developing the team work spirit. Moreover, schools are the first educational institutions that teach us several skills that are useful for our career path for example, how to solve problems, live with colleagues, cope any difficulty, communicate effectively, how to think and analyze adequately. By prioritizing team sports and encouraging them, young persons will prefer to participate and share their own experience and knowledge for the benefits of the society, to seek satisfying results. For instance, when being part of a football team, his experience as a leader may help him mentor his colleagues to their common objective. From the other side, individual sports fit to member of the nation that do not have the team work spirit and the ones who feel wildly comfortable working solely and reaching their own goals. Finally, I prefer the collaborative work to be prioritized ahead of individual work from the early stages of life due to the fact that building a healthy, responsible and cooperative community is the key for the success of a country.

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Sports
in general
 are beneficial for the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 at all ages at all levels. However
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclubcompanysquadpartyorganizationlineup
team
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
, in particular
, have additional advantages that should be encouraged
 from schools.

From one side, living in a more collaborative environment imposes us to believe that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclubcompanysquadpartyorganizationlineup
team
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work
 spirit becomes a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 and should be acquired
 throughout numerous stages in our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
. For this reason
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclubcompanysquadpartyorganizationlineup
team
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sports
 like football and basketball can be one of the ways that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 youth generation developing the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclubcompanysquadpartyorganizationlineup
team
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 spirit.

Moreover
, schools are the first
 educational institutions that teach us several This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 that are useful for our career path for example
, how to solve problems, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 with colleagues, cope any difficulty, communicate effectively
, how to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 and analyze adequately
. By prioritizing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclubcompanysquadpartyorganizationlineup
team
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 and encouraging them, young persons will prefer to participate and share their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 experience and knowledge for the benefits of the society, to seek satisfying results. For instance
, when being part of a football You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclubcompanysquadpartyorganizationlineup
team
, his experience as a leader may This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 him mentor his colleagues to their common objective.

From the other side, individual You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 fit to member of the nation that do not have the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclubcompanysquadpartyorganizationlineup
team
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 spirit and the ones who feel wildly
 comfortable working solely
 and reaching their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 goals.

Finally
, I prefer the collaborative You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 to be prioritized
 ahead of individual You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 from the early stages of life due to the fact that building a healthy, responsible and cooperative community is the key for the success of a country. 