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conditions on Venus are so extreme

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The author of the reading believes that conditions on Venus are so extreme. Also, this plant is too inhospitable for humans, and provides three reasons of support. However, the lecturer rejects the claim made in the reading, casting doubt on all the three reasons presented in the passage. Fisrt, the author claims that atmospheric pressure at the surface of the Venus is too much greater than the pressure at Earth's surface, and not only humans, but also all spacecrafts have been crashed after landing on Venus' surface. This point is challenged by the lecturer. She says that we can use of some baloons in a high distance of the Venus' surface. She elaborates on this by mentioning that due to this activity the Venus' pressure will be equaled the Earth's pressure and will be suitable for humans. Second, the author of the reading states that there is no water supplies in the Venus' surface and oxygen in the Venus' atmosphere. The lecturer rebuts this. She mentions that these materials don't exist at the Venus, but there are some other materials that we are able to produce water and oxygen with a number of chemical action. Furthermore, she points out that we don't need to import these commodities from the Earth. Finally, the writer believes that just 40 percent of the sunlight reaches to the Venus' surface, and about 60 percent of the sunlight traps by clouds or reflects back into space. The lecturer, on the other hand, says that clouds are not too thick. So enough sunlight can passes through clouds.

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Second, the author of the reading states that there is no water supplies in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvision
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 other materials that we are able to produce water and oxygen with a number of chemical action. Furthermore
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