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paragraph about a smart house

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A smart house includes glass doors and windows, and on the 1st floor, there are 4 bedrooms. The home movie theater is on the ground floor, which contains flat TVs. The house gets the energy from solar energy. When you enter the house the LED light will turn on automatically, and the cooling system can be controlled by you. The luxury kitchen is the second biggest place in the house you can find any type of food and cooking equipment. If you want to chill and relax during the summer vacation there is an indoor swimming pool. Finally, the garage, can fit up to 2 cars.
A smart
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house
includes glass doors and windows, and on the 1st floor, there are 4 bedrooms. The home movie theater is on the
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ground floor
, which contains flat TVs. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
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gets
the energy from solar energy. When you enter the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
the LED light will turn on
automatically
, and the cooling system can
be controlled
by you. The luxury kitchen is the second biggest place in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
you can find any type of food and cooking equipment. If you want to chill and relax during the summer vacation there is an indoor swimming pool.
Finally
, the garage, can fit up to 2 cars.
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IELTS essay paragraph about a smart house

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
106 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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