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Our time, my life and our future.

Our time, my life and our future. Nwk5b

A, I will go through a normal weekday. I wake up at 6. 30 to 6. 40 in the morning, I usually stay in my bed until 7 witch is when I realy wake up. After i get out of bed I grab some clean clothes and go to take a shower. When I'm done I get out and go to the kichen to make myself some breakfast. After breakfast I clean up and go to my sofa and relax until it's 5 minutes left untill i need to go. Then i brush my teeth after that I put on my shoes and jacket and leave. After a short walk I'm at school were i spend about half my day. When i get home i usualy relax for about an hour and then i do my homework. After I'm done with my homework i eat dinner with my family. After dinner i go to my room and watch tv for the rest of the day. B Personally i am not to interested in different styles i prefere to for example wear clothes i find comfortable and not to bad looking. Where i am influenced the most would probaly be my music taste where it's influeced by whats new on the playlist i listen to. C I am not to worried about the state of my countries politics though i am a bit more worried about the politics in some other countries. I am also a bit worried about the state of the worlds healthcare system mainly in Africa.

A, I will go through a normal weekday.

I wake up at 6. 30 to 6. 40 in the morning, I usually
 stay in my bed until 7 Possible agreement error. The noun 'witch' seems to be countable, so consider using: "witches".witches
witch
 is when I Possible spelling mistake found.realreadyreallyrealmrelayrely
realy
 wake up. After Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
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get
 out of bed I grab This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 clean clothes and go to take a shower. When I'm done I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 out and go to the Possible spelling mistake found.kitchenlichenkuchen
kichen
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 myself This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 breakfast. After The comma is probably missing here: "breakfast, I".breakfast, I
breakfast I
 clean up and go to my sofa and relax until it's 5 minutes This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
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untill
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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 need to go. Then Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
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 brush my teeth after that I put on my shoes and jacket and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 a short walk I'm at school were Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 spend about half my day. When Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 home i Possible spelling mistake found.usuallyusualusual y
usualy
 relax for about an hour and then Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 do my homework. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 I'm done with my homework Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 eat dinner with my family. After dinner Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 go to my room and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
Possible spelling mistake found.TVtoMTVCTVTTUV
tv
 for the rest of the day.

​B

Personally
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 am not Did you mean "too"?too
to
 interested in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 styles i Possible spelling mistake found.preferprefersprewarprefabpref ereprefer e
prefere
 to for example
 wear clothes Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 find comfortable and not to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 looking. “Where” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Where
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
am influenced
 the most would Possible spelling mistake found.probably
probaly
 be my music taste where it's Possible spelling mistake found.influenced
influeced
 by Possible spelling mistake foundwhat's
whats
 new on the playlist Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 listen to.

​C​​​​

I am not Did you mean "too"?too
to
 worried about the state of my countries politics though Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 am a bit more worried about the politics in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 other countries. I am also
 a bit worried about the state of the worlds healthcare system mainly
 in Africa. 