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Our life has been changed

Our life has been changed 0EOnq
Nowadays life starts to be more horrible and intolerant. I think the hardest part is to be playing two roles in the family as (father & mother) so, you have to handle everything by yourself without any help, on the other hand, it's nice to be independent, living and enjoying your life. You have to watch your budget carefully otherwise you will receive economical issues, consider, arrange all the thing well.
Nowadays life
starts
to be more horrible and intolerant. I
think
the hardest part is to be playing two roles in the family as (father & mother)
so
, you
have to
handle everything by yourself without any
help
,
on the other hand
, it's nice to be independent, living and enjoying your life. You
have to
watch
your budget
carefully
otherwise
you will receive
economical
issues, consider, arrange all the thing well.
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IELTS essay Our life has been changed

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
71 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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