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Online shopping is replacing offline or shopping from stores. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Online shopping is replacing offline or shopping from stores. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? 0An9G

Cutting-edge technology has revolutionized the working of contemporary society. In the former eras, people went out to buy daily stuff and even waited in long queues to get the product. Nevertheless, hi-tech introduction to online shopping has interchanged the scenario and to some extent substituting offline shopping by digging out both positive and negative aspects. Therefore, I think it comes up with both merits and demerits. One of the main advantages of online shopping is the economy of time. Nowadays people can check and choose any goods online using up-to-day technologies such as Internet, smartphones, laptops, etc. Consequently, it does not take prolonged time to make a choice of a particular thing and allow people not to waste time in endless queues. And this brings to modern societies the most valuable resource, time. On the other hand, the major disadvantage of online shopping is unnecessity of personnel. Following this tendency, a large quantity of stores does not need different professions any more. For instance, such as sellers, guards, etc… Indisputably, people who always work at such positions become useless. As a result, it can carry a negative impact such as the increase of unemployment rates. To conclude, every invention comes with two sides. If it has eased our lives, then it poses some drawbacks also.

Cutting-edge technology has revolutionized the working of contemporary society. In the former eras, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 went out to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 daily stuff and even waited in long queues to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 the product. Nevertheless
, hi-tech introduction to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwirednetworked
online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
shopping
 has interchanged the scenario and to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 extent substituting offline You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
shopping
 by digging out both This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 aspects. Therefore
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think
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comes
 up with both merits and demerits. One of the main advantages of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwirednetworked
online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
shopping
 is the economy of time. Nowadays You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 and choose any This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :productscommoditiesmerchandises
goods
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwirednetworked
online
 using up-to-day technologies such as Internet, smartphones, laptops, etc. Consequently
, it does not take prolonged time to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a choice of a particular thing and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 not to waste time in endless queues. And this brings to modern societies the most valuable resource, time.

On the other hand
, the major disadvantage of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwirednetworked
online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
shopping
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unnecessity
 of personnel. Following this tendency, a large quantity of stores does not need This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 professions Did you mean the adverb "anymore"?anymore
any more
. For instance
, such as sellers, guards, etc… Indisputably
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 who always work at such positions become useless. As a result
, it can carry a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 impact such as the increase of unemployment rates.

To conclude
, every invention This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes
 with two sides. If it has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
eased
 our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
, then it poses This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 drawbacks also
. 