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One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?

One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest? 5MGe
Nowadays, traffic congestion is a major issue faced by a lot of people in cities and towns due to an ever- increasing number of automobiles. This essay will focus on reasons behind the traffic congestion and provide possible solutions for the same. There are several factors that cause traffic jams such as populated areas, parking on narrow roads, less usage of public transport, etc. When the people drive personal vehicles, it causes a lot of pollution along with tight chaotic jams. Not only this, the ambulance passing by fails to find clear path during an emergency. It is claimed by traffic police of India that more than 80-85% of traffic is caused by private vehicles during the peak office hours. Thus, traffic jams develops many problems not only for the general public but also for traffic control police. Another cause of acute traffic congestion is not following parking and traffic rules. Most of the people do not follow traffic rules and related signs and directions. As a result, they park their vehicles anywhere on the roads which does not serve as a good example for the citizens to follow. A lot of solutions exist to alleviate the problem of peak- hour congestion. one such solution is that the government should construct wide roads for parking areas and encourage people to use public transportation after parking their cars. This would allow the public to follow park-and-ride scheme in their day- to- day life. . In conclusion, the issue of traffic congestion can be solved by following traffic rules and using public transport for smooth movement of vehicles.
Nowadays,
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is a major issue faced by
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a lot of
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people
in cities and towns due to an ever- increasing number of automobiles. This essay will focus on reasons behind the
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traffic
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congestion
and provide possible solutions for the same.

There are several factors that cause
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traffic
jams such as populated areas,
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parking
on narrow roads, less usage of
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public
transport, etc. When the
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people
drive personal
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vehicles
, it causes
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a lot of
pollution along with tight chaotic jams. Not
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only
this, the ambulance passing by fails to find
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clear
path during an emergency. It
is claimed
by
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traffic
police of India that more than 80-85% of
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traffic
is caused
by private
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vehicles
during the peak office hours.
Thus
,
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jams develops
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problems not
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for the general
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public
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also
for
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control police. Another cause of acute
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congestion
is not following
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parking
and
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. Most of the
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people
do not follow
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rules
and related signs and directions.
As a result
, they park their
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vehicles
anywhere on the roads which does not serve as a
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good
example for the citizens to follow.

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solutions exist to alleviate the problem of peak- hour
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congestion
.
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such solution is that the
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government
should construct wide roads for
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parking
areas and encourage
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people
to
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use
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public
transportation after
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parking
their cars. This would
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allow
the
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public
to follow park-and-ride scheme in their day- to- day life.
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In conclusion
, the issue of
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congestion
can
be solved
by following
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traffic
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rules
and using
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public
transport for smooth movement of
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vehicles
.
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IELTS essay One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?

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  American English
4 paragraphs
266 words
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