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One problem faced by almost every. Why is this happening big city is traffic congestion.

One problem faced by almost every. Why is this happening big city is traffic congestion. D05k
Currently, traffic congestion is serious problem in many countries of the world. This essay will highlight root causes of this phenomenon and suggest practical solutions to mitigate it. Perhaps, the major cause of this issue is that dwellers of wealthy cities use private cars too much. Adult population of cities avoid using public transport and desire to own their private vehicles which leads to congestion. In other words as number of private cars increase the chance of congestion is increase incredibly. Another reasonable cause of traffic congestion is lack of planning city roads. There are many shortcomings in current urban roads which need to be put right. As a result, number of congestions and problems with traffic may occur on the roads which may cause even to some kind of accident either. As for solutions of this background, governments should increase the tax for owning the private car in order to avoid the congested situation on the roads. Instead government should encourage population to use public transport ir vehicles with small size such as bicycles. Another viable approach is that, government should cope with the reconstruction of roads in order to decrease the congestion on the roads. For that, a great amount of money may be ingested by government. To recuperate briefly, this essay discussed how the traffic congestion impact on socities life. This essay also suggested two remedies to mitigate this problem: reduce using private cars and encourage using small sized vehicles and to handle with the reconstruction of roads in order to avoid traffic congestion. If above mentioned measures are taken, the problem may be solved viably.
Currently
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traffic
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congestion
is serious
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problem
in
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many
countries of the world. This essay will highlight root
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causes
of this phenomenon and suggest practical solutions to mitigate it.

Perhaps, the major
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cause
of this issue is that dwellers of wealthy cities
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use
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private
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cars
too much. Adult population of cities avoid using public transport and desire to
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own
their
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private
vehicles which leads to
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congestion
.
In other words
as number of
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private
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cars
increase the chance of
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congestion
is increase
incredibly
.

Another reasonable
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cause
of
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traffic
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congestion
is lack of planning city
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roads
. There are
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many
shortcomings in
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current
urban
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roads
which need to
be put
right.
As a result
, number of
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congestions
and
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problems
with
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traffic
may occur on the
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roads
which may
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cause
even to
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some
kind of accident either.

As for solutions of this background,
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governments
should increase the tax for owning the
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private
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car
in order to avoid the congested situation on the
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roads
.
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Instead
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government
should encourage population to
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use
public transport
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ir
vehicles with
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small
size such as bicycles.

Another viable approach is that,
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government
should cope with the reconstruction of
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roads
in order to decrease the
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congestion
on the
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roads
. For that, a great amount of money may
be ingested
by
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government
.

To recuperate
briefly
, this essay discussed how the
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traffic
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congestion
impact on
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socities
life. This essay
also
suggested two remedies to mitigate this
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problem
:
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reduce
using
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private
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cars
and encourage using
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small
sized vehicles and to handle with the reconstruction of
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roads
in order to avoid
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traffic
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congestion
. If above mentioned measures
are taken
, the
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problem
may
be solved
viably
.
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IELTS essay One problem faced by almost every. Why is this happening big city is traffic congestion.

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
269 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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