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one of the main concerns people have encountred around the world is food supplay,as wolrd population is exploding.this lead to some individuals thinking that GM food can be an effective solution to feed this unbridled population .while, others do not agree with this view.in my personal perspective,GM food may be a beneficial way to tackle this problem but not enough. as a consequence, other solutions should be taken into considered.

one of the main concerns people have encountred around the world is food supplay, as wolrd population is exploding. this lead to some individuals thinking that GM food can be an effective solution to feed this unbridled population. while, others do not agree with this view. in my personal perspective, GM food may be a beneficial way to tackle this problem but not enough. as a consequence, other solutions should be taken into considered. aQwYV
one of the main concerns people have encountred around the world is food supplay, as wolrd population is exploding. this lead to some individuals thinking that GM food can be an effective solution to feed this unbridled population. while, others do not agree with this view. in my personal perspective, GM food may be a beneficial way to tackle this problem but not enough. as a consequence, other solutions should be taken into considered.
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IELTS essay one of the main concerns people have encountred around the world is food supplay, as wolrd population is exploding. this lead to some individuals thinking that GM food can be an effective solution to feed this unbridled population. while, others do not agree with this view. in my personal perspective, GM food may be a beneficial way to tackle this problem but not enough. as a consequence, other solutions should be taken into considered.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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