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One last time, okay..okay

One last time, okay..okay K0D0N
It's been a while since I've posted anything on my LinkedIn profile, and I'm glad to announce that yesterday marked my last day as a Virtual Volunteer after a fantastic 4-week virtual volunteering journey with Aiesec in Malaysia. I volunteered for this project called Light A Refugee's Dream (LARD) to impact refugees' lives through education since most refugee children do not have access to Malaysia's formal education system. It was a tremendous experience for me to teach refugee children Mathematics from a conflicted country like Myanmar. At first, I was a bit nervous since it was my first time volunteering with AIESEC. However, despite the setbacks, I positively took up the challenge, and I became more confident when I knew that I would teach math. However, It turned out that teaching mathematics virtually was not as easy as teaching mathematics face-to-face and required a plethora of patience, dedication and great skills in handling virtual classes. Although, on the contrary, I also experienced what most lecturers and teachers face nowadays, the moment where there were no responses from the students when I asked questions. Yet, once I created an excellent teacher-student bonding, everything changed in a blink of an eye. Guess what? The students started to interact with me by having two-way communication, and the rest is history owing to the fact that a teacher-student relationship is essential for any successful learning process. Also, my communication skills, presentation artistry, planning and execution prowess, and teamwork have skyrocketed. Even though it was hard at the beginning, it was worth it in the end. A huge thanks to the Director of this project, Natasha Lim, and the Project Manager, Nur Iman Azmey, for giving me such a precious opportunity to learn and grow. Not to forget my lifetime peers Sulagna, Ayman, Elson, and Xuan Rou for always being there for me when I needed your help during the volunteering, and I couldn't make it this far without your support. All in all, I want to say thank you from the bottom of my heart, and I wish you all the best in your future endeavours and those who are interested in contributing to this project, I highly recommend you to volunteer. Remember that service to others is the rent you pay for your room here on Earth ~ Muhammad Ali.
It's been a while since I've posted anything on my LinkedIn profile, and I'm glad to announce that yesterday marked my last day as a Virtual Volunteer after a fantastic 4-week virtual volunteering journey with
Aiesec
in Malaysia. I volunteered for this
project
called Light A Refugee's Dream (LARD) to impact refugees'
lives
through education since most refugee children do not have access to Malaysia's formal education system. It was a tremendous experience for me to teach refugee children Mathematics from a conflicted country like Myanmar. At
first
, I was a bit nervous since it was my
first
time volunteering with AIESEC.
However
, despite the setbacks, I
positively
took up the challenge, and I became more confident when I knew that I would teach math.
However
, It turned out that teaching mathematics
virtually
was not as easy as teaching mathematics face-to-face and required a plethora of patience, dedication and great
skills
in handling virtual classes. Although,
on the contrary
, I
also
experienced what most lecturers and teachers face nowadays, the moment where there were no responses from the students when I asked questions.
Yet
, once I created an excellent teacher-student bonding, everything
changed
in a blink of an eye. Guess what? The students
started
to interact with me by having two-way communication, and the rest is history owing to the fact that a teacher-student relationship is essential for any successful learning process.

Also
, my communication
skills
, presentation artistry, planning and execution prowess, and teamwork have skyrocketed.
Even though
it was
hard
at the beginning, it was worth it in the
end
. A huge thanks to the Director of this
project
, Natasha
Lim
, and the
Project
Manager,
Nur
Iman
Azmey
, for giving me such a precious opportunity to learn and grow. Not to forget my lifetime peers
Sulagna
,
Ayman
,
Elson
, and
Xuan
Rou
for always being there for me when I needed your
help
during the volunteering, and I couldn't
make
it this far without your support. All in all, I want to say thank you from the bottom of my heart, and I wish you all the best in your future
endeavours
and those who
are interested
in contributing to this
project
, I
highly
recommend you to volunteer. Remember that service to others is the rent you pay for your room here on Earth ~ Muhammad Ali.
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IELTS essay One last time, okay..okay

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
387 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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