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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.Why do you think this is happening?What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? roRo
The amount of rubbish and waste being produced by humans is increasing rapidly. It is a common problem that the whole world is facing right now. Appropriate measures and steps must be undertaken before things become uncontrollable. It is a known fact that with increase in population and industrialization the amount of waste churned out has also been growing enormously. The increase in consumption of packaged food products is one reason that has led to the growth in the amount of rubbish produced. Secondly the popularity of plastic products in the last couple of decades has also contributed to this menace of growing waste. Plastic products cannot be recycled and they are usually dumped near the sea shores which has also taken a huge toll on the marine life. Moreover it is also noticed these days in some overcrowded cities the rubbish is usually disposed on dumping grounds in the middle of residential areas. It is huge thing of concern, because it poses serious threat to people’s health as it can become the reason for multiplying germs and diseases. Industrial waste is another reason that has led to increase in water pollution. I believe this is a critical time and government and higher authorities should start taking corrective actions and measures immediately. Firstly government should ban the use of plastic products everywhere and should encourage the use of products which can be recycled. Furthermore government should impose a limit on the supply and use of paper products such as paper tissues and people should be urged to use resources like sanitizers and water for maintaining hygiene. Paper should be preserved and must be used judiciously. Secondly government should encourage the industries to apply recycling mechanism to their industrial process to control the amount of residual waste produced. Lastly public awareness must be increased by organizing campaigns and meetings to urge people to be more responsible about this issue. To conclude we can say that growth of waste and rubbish is now a global problem so every individual and world governing bodies should be responsible and act immediately to put a check on it.
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rubbish
and
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waste
being produced
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rapidly
. It is a common problem that the whole world is facing right
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now
. Appropriate measures and steps
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before
things become uncontrollable.

It is a known fact that with increase in population and industrialization the
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amount
of
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waste
churned out has
also
been growing
enormously
. The increase in consumption of packaged food
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products
is one reason that has led to the growth in the
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amount
of
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rubbish
produced.
Secondly
the popularity of plastic
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products
in the last couple of decades has
also
contributed to this menace of growing
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waste
. Plastic
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products
cannot be
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recycled and
they are
usually
dumped near the sea shores which has
also
taken a huge toll on the marine life.

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it is
also
noticed these days in
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some
overcrowded cities the
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rubbish
is
usually
disposed on dumping grounds in the middle of residential areas. It
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is huge
thing of concern,
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because
it poses serious threat to
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people
’s health as it can become the reason for multiplying germs and diseases. Industrial
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waste
is another reason that has led to increase in water pollution.

I believe this is a critical time and
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government
and higher authorities should
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start
taking corrective actions and measures immediately.
Firstly
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government
should ban the
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use
of plastic
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products
everywhere and should encourage the
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use
of
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products
which can
be recycled
.
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Furthermore
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government
should impose a limit on the supply and
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use
of paper
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products
such as paper tissues and
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people
should
be urged
to
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use
resources like sanitizers and water for maintaining hygiene. Paper should
be preserved
and
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must
be
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used
judiciously
.

Secondly
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government
should encourage the industries to apply recycling mechanism to their industrial process to control the
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amount
of residual
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waste
produced.
Lastly
public awareness
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must
be increased
by organizing campaigns and meetings to urge
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people
to be more responsible about this issue.

To conclude
we can say that growth of
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waste
and
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rubbish
is
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now
a global problem
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so
every individual and world governing bodies should be responsible and act immediately to put a
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check
on it.
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IELTS essay Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
353 words
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