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Write about the following topic: Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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We are living in 21 century, as compared to people in 80’s or 90’s we are making extra amount of waste compared to them, I really agree and if this not controlled now, the existence of human being might be danger, so individual incentive and government interference is required in the above matter. As now a days the lifestyle is not the same as our elders use to have, we are getting more and more involved and serious about our own future and works hard to be prosperous in life, due to which our eating, drinking habit have changed totally, we preferred packed food and drinks more. this is also happening as because we consume our food in the go, for which one and only option is packed food. A strict laws should be imposed by governments on packed foods, like the package should be such that gets dissolved in nature and does not make rubbish, in restaurants and café packed food should be prohibited entirely, polyethene shopping bags should be replace with paper bags, last but not the least governments should invest in research and developments so that new invention should be there so that plastic could be replaced completely. We see now a days in restaurants that they offer parcel or take away options, which encourage people to add more and more rubbish, because after finishing eating it will add up in dust bin, which should be stopped at any cost
We are living in
21 century
, as compared to
people
in
80’s
or
90’s
we are making extra amount of waste compared to them, I
really
agree
and if this not controlled
now
, the existence of human being might be
danger
,
so
individual incentive and
government
interference
is required
in the above matter.

As
now a days
the lifestyle is not the same as our elders
use to
have, we are getting more and more involved and serious about our
own
future and works
hard
to be prosperous in life, due to which our eating, drinking habit have
changed
totally
, we preferred
packed
food
and drinks more.
this
is
also
happening as
because
we consume our
food
in the go, for which one and
only
option is
packed
food.

A strict
laws
should
be imposed
by
governments
on
packed
foods
, like the package should be such that
gets
dissolved in nature and does not
make
rubbish, in restaurants and café
packed
food
should
be prohibited
entirely
,
polyethene
shopping bags should be
replace
with paper bags, last
but
not the least
governments
should invest in research and developments
so
that new invention should be there
so
that plastic could
be replaced
completely.

We
see
now a days
in restaurants that they offer parcel or take away options, which encourage
people
to
add
more and more rubbish,
because
after finishing eating it will
add
up in dust bin, which should be
stopped
at any cost
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IELTS essay : Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

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