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Nowadays university education is considered very important for people's future.However, there are a lot of successful people who did not get higher education.Do you think that higher education is necessary to succeed in life?

Nowadays university education is considered very important for people's future. However, there are a lot of successful people who did not get higher education. Do you think that higher education is necessary to succeed in life? y3Ad
In recent years, the significance of tertiary education has seen a gradual increase. While some people claim that without having an academic degree, one can get success in his/her life. This essay would discuss that in order to be successful, a person should have university degree. To begin with, there are plethora of benefits of University education in each and every person's life. The first one is that in this modern world, companies still rely on diploma while searching for new employee or promoting existing one. To exemplify this, Microsoft corporation does not allow to more and promote people without any university degree. As a result, without having adequate academic skills, people cannot build a brilliant career and consequently they cannot gain success in their life. In addition, owing to University education, person can get knowledge regarding different subjects and he/she can establish new and sound relations with others such as teachers and friends. For instance, if a person has enough knowledge about his/her subject, he/she can shape his/her career and get success. Therefore, tertiary education plays inevitable role in person's life for attaining success. In conclusion, after hashing out above information, this essay firmly believe that for getting success, the university education contributes a lot.
In recent years, the significance of tertiary
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education
has
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seen
a gradual increase. While
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some
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people
claim that without having an academic degree, one can
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get
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success
in his/her
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life
. This essay would discuss that in order to be successful, a person should have
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university
degree. To
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begin
with, there are plethora of benefits of
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University
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education
in each and every person's
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life
. The
first
one is that in this modern world,
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companies
still
rely on diploma while searching for new employee or promoting existing one. To exemplify this, Microsoft corporation does not
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allow
to more and promote
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people
without any
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university
degree.
As a result
, without having adequate academic
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skills
,
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people
cannot build a brilliant career and
consequently
they cannot gain
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success
in their
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life
.
In addition
, owing to
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University
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education
, person can
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get
knowledge regarding
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different
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subjects and
he/she can establish new and sound relations with others such as teachers and friends.
For instance
, if a person has
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enough
knowledge about his/her subject, he/she can shape his/her career and
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get
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success
.
Therefore
, tertiary
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education
plays inevitable role in person's
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life
for attaining
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success
.
In conclusion
, after hashing out above information, this essay
firmly
believe that for getting
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success
, the
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university
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education
contributes a lot.
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IELTS essay Nowadays university education is considered very important for people's future. However, there are a lot of successful people who did not get higher education. Do you think that higher education is necessary to succeed in life?

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