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Nowadays, there are lots of people who have not jobs while, they have good qualification for that job even they have a full experience about that job they can not get a job, because rich people give money to manager for obtain that job which is not better way to present our next generation that government does not helping of poor families who have better education than other who got their jobs with money.

Nowadays, there are lots of people who have not jobs while, they have good qualification for that job even they have a full experience about that job they can not get a job, because rich people give money to manager for obtain that job which is not better way to present our next generation that government does not helping of poor families who have better education than other who got their jobs with money. 702My
Nowadays, there are lots of people who have not jobs while, they have good qualification for that job even they have a full experience about that job they can not get a job, because rich people give money to manager for obtain that job which is not better way to present our next generation that government does not helping of poor families who have better education than other who got their jobs with money.
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while, they have
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even they have a full experience about that
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they can not
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rich
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give money to manager for obtain that
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which is not
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IELTS essay Nowadays, there are lots of people who have not jobs while, they have good qualification for that job even they have a full experience about that job they can not get a job, because rich people give money to manager for obtain that job which is not better way to present our next generation that government does not helping of poor families who have better education than other who got their jobs with money.

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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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