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nowadays students can access information online , so library services are no longer necessary. Do You agree or disagree? Give your opinion With example from your own experience

nowadays students can access information online, so library services are no longer necessary. Give your opinion With example from your own experience jRVQM
It is true that technology has become an indispensable part of our lives. people get easily information from one click on internet. I, however, disagree with that library services has been reducing. In this essay, I shall discuss my notion with relevant example. On the one hand, I believe that plethora of people prefer to access information from online. There are many reasons behind this. First and Foremost view is that If, people using online for access information thus, sometimes they can get fack information rather than they want actual information. Secondly, Some older people do not have a ability of using internet and they do not have a sufficient knowledge about how to use internet, so they denied to using Internet for getting information. On the Flip Side, Why I disagree with that library services has become no longer part. There are several reasons behind this. Examining the former view, library has absolutely Pivotal part of every People, because of every generation people get easily information from library. Additionally, library gives authentic information with Fully desci information. Besides, In many libraries, If We are confused about any topics that time librarian can aid to us. For instance, recently I went to library for reading ancient books, so that time I was anxious about topic, hence librarian was helped me. To Conclude, it can be reiterate that If, using the online information sometimes not ethical information and using the library service, people get all factual information. So, library are longer part in recent as well as Future
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people
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get
easily
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information
from one click on internet. I,
however
, disagree with that library services has been reducing. In this essay, I shall discuss my notion with relevant example.

On the one hand, I believe that plethora of
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people
prefer to access
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information
from online. There are
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many
reasons behind this.
First
and Foremost view is that If,
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people
using online for access
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information
thus
,
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sometimes
they can
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get
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fack
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information
rather
than they want actual
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information
.
Secondly
,
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Some
older
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people
do not have
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a
ability of using
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internet and
they do not have a sufficient knowledge about how to
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use
internet,
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so
they denied to using Internet for getting information.

On the Flip Side, Why I disagree with that library services has become no longer
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part
. There are several reasons behind this. Examining the former view, library has
absolutely
Pivotal
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part
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People
,
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of every generation
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people
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get
easily
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information
from library.
Additionally
, library gives authentic
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information
with
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desci
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information
.
Besides
, In
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many
libraries, If We
are confused
about any topics that time librarian can aid to us.
For instance
, recently I went to library for reading ancient books,
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so
that time I was anxious about topic,
hence
librarian was
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helped
me.

To Conclude
, it can be
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that If, using the online
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information
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sometimes
not ethical
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information
and using the library service,
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people
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get
all factual
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information
.
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So
, library are longer
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part
in recent
as well
as Future
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IELTS essay nowadays students can access information online, so library services are no longer necessary. Give your opinion With example from your own experience

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  American English
4 paragraphs
256 words
6.0
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