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Nowadays students are using Mobile phone ,it has some negative and positive on students.

Nowadays students are using Mobile phone, it has some negative and positive on students. PRMVX

Nowadays everyone is using mobile phone for their study and entertainment. it has saome bad effects and good on thes is matter of grave concern, which I will discuss in upcoming paragraphs. Firstly if we talk about negatives of mobile phones on students. it effect their daily routine, because pupils prefer to spend their most of on devices for entertainment purposes and for playing different games. If also effect their social relations, because they have not much time to spend with their love ones, which cause a wall between tham and their parents. Positives are in form of information provider. It helps them in their study by providing information about theri studies and also provide online class to improve theri scores. It also help them to communicate with their love ones from far distance, also gives them updated news to make them updated In conclusion, mobile phone have some negatives on students but positives are in the form of information provider, helps them to communicate

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it
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saome
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bad
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good
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thes is
 matter of grave concern, which I will discuss in upcoming paragraphs.

Firstly
 if we talk about negatives of mobile phones on students. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIt
it
Did you mean "effects"?effects
effect
 their daily routine, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 pupils prefer to spend their most of on devices for entertainment purposes and for playing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 games.

If also
 effect their social relations, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they have not much time to spend with their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsomeonewhoever
ones
, which cause a wall between Possible spelling mistake found.thattheirtheyteamthanthem
tham
 and their parents.

Positives are in form of information provider. It This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 them in their study by providing information about Possible spelling mistake found.theirthereTeriCheriSheritherm
theri
 studies and also
 provide online This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
Possible spelling mistake found.theirthereTeriCheriSheritherm
theri
 scores.

It also
Did you mean "helps"?helps
help
 them to communicate with their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsomeonewhoever
ones
 from far distance, also
 gives them updated news to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 them updated

In conclusion
, mobile phone have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 negatives on students This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 positives are in the form of information provider, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 them to communicate