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Nowadays social media and its importance

In the past times people could not own the chance that gives them knowing, seeing and witnessing to happening events. It caused many unfair accidents with people in society. Because of this factor they are interested in reading newspaper and listening to radio before. Then social media appeared. People could know what's happening in environment. Generally, nowadays people can know everything by social media. Because there are a lot of internet editions of sites and newspapers that give necessary informations and news.
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IELTS essay Nowadays social media and its importance

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  American English
1 paragraphs
82 words
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