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Nowadays people rely on choose international products rather than local discuss advantage and disadvantage of this

Nowadays people rely on choose international products rather than local discuss advantage and disadvantage of this gxm2l
Undoubtedly, a number of people choose to buying international products instead of domestic one. There are several pros and cons of this trend have been enunciated in upcoming paragraphs The primary benefit of this trend that it is better quality of products. This means that mostly people check the quality of producs in terms of shopping. In international market the product manufactured by expertise in design or good raw material are used in production of product. Mainly this type of products usable in long term they does not damaged or destroyed in single use. Another Plus point of this is widee
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, a number of
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people
choose to buying international
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products
instead
of domestic one. There are several pros and cons of this trend have
been enunciated
in upcoming paragraphs The primary benefit of this trend that it is better quality of
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products
. This means that
mostly
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people
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check
the quality of
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producs
in terms of shopping. In international market the
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product
manufactured by expertise in design or
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good
raw material are
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used
in production of
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product
.
Mainly
this type of
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products
usable in long term they
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does
not
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damaged
or
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destroyed
in single
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. Another Plus point of this is
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IELTS essay Nowadays people rely on choose international products rather than local discuss advantage and disadvantage of this

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
100 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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