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Nowadays, people rarely communicate with their neighbors ,and it impacts negatively on local communication

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Currently, people generally neglect neighborhood communications and this is harming to communicate locally. This is mainly due to lack of respect each other. However, there is a possible solution that address this. There are a number of reasons why people hardly interact with their neighbors but primary one, here, is lack of respect to neighborhood interaction. Nowadays, many countries and cities are filled with rich and poor families that emerge a huge disparity and hardship in communication each other. Admittedly the rich rarely interact with their low-income neighbors because of lack of respect among them so local communication is suffering. Thus, I think if someone is wealthy, he tends to neglect towards neighborhood. Nevertheless, there is an alternative that can solve this minor issue. I think, here, local chairman can be a good help. These days, most people rarely go to mosques or charities this is influencing negatively for people. This is causing loss of culture and lack of respect and so on. If local chairman urges people to go to the very places, there would be more people who are learning how to respect and make people happy and this emerges good relationships among people. In conclusion, although local communication suffers from lack of respect, the alternative way, I mentioned could improve neighborhood interaction, I think.
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neglect
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neighborhood
communications and this is harming to communicate
locally
. This is
mainly
due to
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lack
of
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respect
each other.
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, there is a possible solution that address this. There are a number of reasons why
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people
hardly interact with their neighbors
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but
primary one, here, is
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lack
of
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respect
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neighborhood
interaction. Nowadays,
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many
countries and cities
are filled
with rich and poor families that emerge a huge disparity and hardship in
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communication
each other.
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the rich rarely interact with their low-income neighbors
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because
of
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lack
of
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respect
among them
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local
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communication
is suffering.
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, I
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think
if someone is wealthy, he tends to neglect towards
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neighborhood
.
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, there is an alternative that can solve this minor issue. I
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think
, here,
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local
chairman can be a
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good
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help
. These days, most
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people
rarely go to mosques or charities this is influencing
negatively
for
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people
. This is causing loss of culture and
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lack
of
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respect
and
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so
on. If
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local
chairman urges
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people
to go to the
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places, there would be more
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people
who are learning how to
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respect
and
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make
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people
happy and this emerges
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good
relationships among
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people
.
In conclusion
, although
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local
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communication
suffers from
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lack
of
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respect
, the alternative way, I mentioned could
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improve
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neighborhood
interaction, I
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IELTS essay Nowadays, people rarely communicate with their neighbors, and it impacts negatively on local communication

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
217 words
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