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Nowadays, people become more educated and the woman will abandon her needs to be a female, to what extent do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays, people become more educated and the woman will abandon her needs to be a female, 2bRRo

In this contemporary world, we have a wrong perspective that the human brain is evolving; thanks to the ascending of data clumps and the easier ways of communication. Additionally, People tend to be more educated with lots of credentials and higher degrees, however, the woman's nature will never change. These days we will find the woman in every modern career, shoulder by shoulder with the man. However, her feminine nature will force her to be jealous when she finds another girl prettier than her or even more charismatic. The female, by nature, loves to be the centre of the attention because of her beauty. That's why we will find lots of women ignore their educational degrees or even dismiss their career just for a husband. On the other hand, billions of dollars are spent on cosmetics and fashion annually. That puts us into a controversial question, why is the woman more vulnerable to her external appearance than the man? The answer to this question is still ambiguous or maybe we need a biological interpretation to describe the hormonal behaviour and the brain activity of their actions. To sum, despite modern life, a woman will stay the woman with all her needs and challenges.

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 perspective that the human brain is evolving; thanks to the ascending of data clumps and the easier ways of communication. Additionally
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. However
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 their educational degrees or even dismiss their career This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
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 for a husband.

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, billions of dollars are spent
 on cosmetics and fashion annually
. That puts us into a controversial question, why is the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgirlwifedaughtermothershe
woman
 more vulnerable to her external appearance than the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
? The answer to this question is still
 ambiguous or maybe we need a biological interpretation to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :characterizeportray
describe
 the hormonal Possible spelling mistake. 'behaviour' is British English.behavior
behaviour
 and the brain activity of their actions.

To sum, despite modern life, a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgirlwifedaughtermothershe
woman
 will stay the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgirlwifedaughtermothershe
woman
 with all her needs and challenges. 