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Nowadays people are trying to have a successful career and happy family life at the same time. What problems could this create? How can people overcome them?

Nowadays people are trying to have a successful career and happy family life at the same time. What problems could this create? How can people overcome them? D1Ep
Building new homes and business property have been expanding astronomically in metropolitan area. In this scenario, inhabitants build their buildings in a way they like rather then implementation of any design These type of activities bring more drawbacks then it's positive impact and the reasons for my inclination are astoularted in touil posugsuphs. In the inception, creating a pooperty without I proper plan of design may cause problem not only is about Ventilation but also it' has become less spacious. Que to these problem living in a house may become Sulcort ve people con feel lack of space for their clothes and the things they use for life chores. Moreover, people com not get direct sunlight through window. Although, they mange to implement the style they like they are not aware of direction of sunlight and do not have sense of Picsart design they In addition to this, majority of people do not have knowledge of designing even though house wook place building they try to impose their incomplete knowledge. As a consequence, it makes building look like scoop and less otructive. If the whole recedential people try to follow their own style then impression of that residential area will create conflicts among soclety and citizens. In shure andoust, it is building model because could be wants more to a cheaper method to design hring building designer expenshe. Sometimes house owners Quld the and designer case dream house or work office com mot replicate thelx style in this with own style con de monte fauteuil. tting In conclusion, building house in need of own style and roast meaNing com be advantageous at some extent. However, increasing construction without any plan can lead to several problems that is not Lavaiduble.
Building
new homes and business property have been expanding
astronomically
in metropolitan area. In this scenario, inhabitants build their
buildings
in a way they like
rather
then
implementation of any
design
These type of activities bring
more drawbacks then
it's
positive
impact and the reasons for my inclination are
astoularted
in
touil
posugsuphs
.

In the inception, creating a
pooperty
without I proper plan of
design
may cause problem not
only
is about Ventilation
but
also
it' has become less spacious. Que to
these problem
living in a
house
may become
Sulcort
ve
people
con feel lack of space for their clothes and the things they
use
for life chores.
Moreover
,
people
com not
get
direct sunlight through window. Although,
they mange
to implement the
style
they like they are not aware of direction of sunlight and do not have sense of
Picsart
design
they

In addition
to this, majority of
people
do not have knowledge of designing
even though
house
wook
place
building
they try to impose their incomplete knowledge. As a consequence, it
makes
building
look like scoop and less
otructive
. If the whole
recedential
people
try to follow their
own
style
then impression of that residential area will create conflicts among
soclety
and citizens.

In
shure
andoust
, it is
building
model
because
could be wants more to a cheaper method to
design
hring
building
designer
expenshe
.
Sometimes
house
owners
Quld
the and designer case dream
house
or work office com mot replicate
thelx
style
in this with
own
style
con
de
monte
fauteuil
.
tting


In conclusion
,
building
house
in need of
own
style
and roast
meaNing
com be advantageous at
some
extent.
However
, increasing construction without any plan can lead to several problems
that is
not
Lavaiduble
.
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IELTS essay Nowadays people are trying to have a successful career and happy family life at the same time. What problems could this create? How can people overcome them?

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