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Describe favourite colour

Describe favourite colour lrmb
There are several colour in the world. different persons have diverse choices. some people prefer light colour other prefer bright colors today I would like to talk about my favourite colour that is back nd yellow. I like it most due to some reasons firstly when I wear this color dress I feel extremely confident and pretty. when I go to outside to any picnic with my friends a always prefer black color. last month my brother marriage I wear black color gown my all friends tell me your are very beautiful in this color and I feel very energetic when I listen these words. finally a like this color most.
There are
Possible agreement error. The noun colour seems to be countable; consider using: "several colours".
several colour
in the world.
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different
persons have diverse choices.
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some
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people
prefer light
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colour
other prefer bright colors
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today
I would like to talk about my
Possible spelling mistake. 'favourite' is British English.
favourite
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colour
that is
back
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nd
yellow. I like it most due to
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some
reasons
firstly
when I wear this
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color
dress I feel
extremely
confident and pretty.
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when
I
There isn't usually a preposition before "outside". Did you mean "go outside"?
go to outside
to any picnic with my friends
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
always prefer black
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color
.
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last
month my brother marriage I wear black
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color
gown my all friends
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tell
me your are
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very
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beautiful
in this
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color
and I feel
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very
energetic when I listen these words.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
finally
a like this
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color
most.

IELTS essay Describe favourite colour

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
111 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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