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Nowadays people are having unhealthy diet habits and do not do physical exercise why this is happening what can be done to encourage people to follow healthy lifestyle

Nowadays people are having unhealthy diet habits and do not do physical exercise why this is happening what can be done to encourage people to follow healthy lifestyle ldmJX
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IELTS essay Nowadays people are having unhealthy diet habits and do not do physical exercise why this is happening what can be done to encourage people to follow healthy lifestyle

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