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nowadays , people are buying more imported food for a decades rather than local foods . is it positive or negative development?

nowadays, people are buying more imported food for a decades rather than local foods. is it positive or negative development? Do5wm
Nowadays, the demand for imported food has increased over the past few decades and people enjoy these delicious cuisine which cause a danger for locally produced food. It has both pros and cons. In my opinion, it has more positive impacts as strengthen the bonds between countries and products of better quality than the cons such as costlier thn local foods. To commence with, what are the advantages of foreign cuisine? Firstly, purchasing of imported food will help to build strong bonds. As the raw materials of internationally produced dishes are imported from other nations such as India. If any country deals to import and export such products, they get a chance to establish bond between those countries as well as it will boost the economy of country. For instance, Domino's and Macdonalds are those companies who invest money in other nations and people are buying the traditional foods of those countries. In addition to it, majority of the transported foods are of good quality and of delicious taste. As a result, individuals can order variety of food such as Chinese and Italian food, also these are quality checked foods. On contrary, there are some cons of foreign foods along with pros as all the exotic foods are expansive than the local foods because government impose taxes on such food like service taxes. So, it is unaffordable for many people to buy. for example, a small pizzas or burgers are costlier than the regional cuisines. To conclude, the advantages of imported foods as making connections between nations and good quality checked, good taste are more than the harms such as more expansive. Even the drawbacks of these foods are neglected in front of its benefits.
Nowadays, the demand for
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imported
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food
has increased over the past few decades and
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people
enjoy these delicious cuisine which cause a
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danger
for
locally
produced
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food
. It has both pros and cons. In my opinion, it has more
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positive
impacts as strengthen the bonds between
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countries
and products of better
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quality
than the cons such as costlier
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thn
local foods.

To commence with, what are the advantages of foreign cuisine?
Firstly
, purchasing of
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imported
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food
will
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help
to build strong bonds. As the raw materials of
internationally
produced dishes are
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imported
from other nations such as India. If any
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country
deals to import and export such products, they
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get
a chance to establish bond between those
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countries
as well
as it will boost the economy of
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country
.
For instance
, Domino's and
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Macdonalds
are those
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companies
who invest money in other nations and
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people
are buying the traditional
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foods
of those countries.

In addition
to it,
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majority of
the transported
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foods
are of
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good
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quality
and of delicious taste.
As a result
, individuals can order variety of
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food
such as Chinese and Italian
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food
,
also
these are
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quality
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checked
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foods
. On contrary, there are
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some
cons of foreign
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foods
along with pros as all the exotic
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foods
are
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expansive
than the local
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foods
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because
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government
impose taxes on such
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food
like service taxes.
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So
, it is unaffordable for
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many
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people
to
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buy
.
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for
example, a
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small
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pizzas
or burgers are costlier than the regional cuisines.

To conclude
, the advantages of
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imported
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foods
as making connections between nations and
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good
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quality
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checked
,
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good
taste are more than the harms such as more expansive. Even the drawbacks of these
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foods
are neglected
in front of its benefits.
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IELTS essay nowadays, people are buying more imported food for a decades rather than local foods. is it positive or negative development?

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