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Nowadays one of the most challenging hot issues which has been recently been under the media spot light is poverty.

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Nowadays one of the most challenging hot issues which has been recently been under the media spot light is poverty. There are lots of opinions about the different reasons of being wealthy or poverty. As far as we know human being stated with many different problems. Human rights has mostly ignored by governments and it led to fundamental problems like poverty. In opposite side there are small groups of people who do not care anything. Moreover they even use poor people to achieve their goals. In my idea, there are many reasons which can make poverty and poor people; First, governments. Secondly, oppression of people. Thirdly, poor knowledge. Poverty is the world that can bring many negative energies to everyone. During last century, by improving technology and also quality of peopleʼs life, shining of poverty has been considerable more. One of impediment reasons to make poverty for people is our governments. It is very essential issue and of course it needs lots of time to discuss about it. Governments has constantly obtain different rules which have negative influences in weak generation of society. For instance, by looking to aggregate amounts of taxes during a one year we can understand more than 70 percentage of taxes have been paid by weak groups of people in a society. An instance which was mentioned above show very clear thing that the high amounts of pressure in a commercialized society are on poor level of people. Being cruetly has gradually increased in our societies. People with low connections and also weak ability has always been bothered by higher level of people. They could not get their rights because there was no person to support them. There a lots of examples to prove this idea. for instance, By looking to jails and criminals we can get results most of the people who committed a crime was innocence and they just put on the jails because of lack of attitude, knowledge and also supporting. The last reasons which has not attractive been for government is poor knowledge. People by poor amounts of education and low-level of family have widely suffered of this issue. One of the serious idea is that they do not know how to find their abilities. Lack of knowledge and any motivation can lead to poverty as far as we know. For example. More than 90 percentage of arrested people in jails who committed crimes are under middle education. The prior reason show significant importance of education. At the end, I strongly believe that governments plays a critical role to make poverty in a society and the second basic reason is our people who can make unbalance level of living.
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and it led to fundamental problems like
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. In opposite side there are
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small
groups of
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do not care anything.
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they even
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use
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poor
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, there are
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energies to everyone. During last century, by improving technology and
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quality of
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has been considerable more. One of impediment
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for
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essential issue and
of course
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obtain
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influences in weak generation of
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, by looking to aggregate amounts of taxes during a one year we can understand more than 70 percentage of taxes have
been paid
by weak groups of
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people
in a
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was mentioned
above
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thing that the high amounts of pressure in a commercialized
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are on
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level of
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with low connections and
also
weak ability has always
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by higher level of
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people
. They could not
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results most of the
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innocence and
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of lack of attitude, knowledge and
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amounts of education and low-level of family have
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is that they do not know how to find their abilities. Lack of knowledge and any motivation can lead to
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poverty
as far as we know.
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. More than 90 percentage of arrested
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people
in jails
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who
committed crimes are under middle education. The prior
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reason
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show
significant importance of education.

At the
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, I
strongly
believe that
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plays a critical role to
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make
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poverty
in a
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society
and the second basic
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reason
is our
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people
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unbalance level of living.

IELTS essay Nowadays one of the most challenging hot issues which has been recently been under the media spot light is poverty.

Essay
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5 paragraphs
447 words
5.0
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