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Nowadays news companies spend a lot of money covering international news. However, local news is more relevant to people’s live and should receive more funding. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Nowadays news companies spend a lot of money covering international news. However, local news is more relevant to people’s live and should receive more funding. with this statement. 3aL2X
In today scenerio, news companies are doing tremendous job by giving us information about almost everywhere. In the contrary, the reporting media organizations are spending more money and time in capturing international news. If we see local news channel are doing a good job showing more realistic and accurate data. I completely agree with the statement that local news company should receive more fund. The reasons behind my opinion are portrayed in subsequent paragraphs. To begin with, in a well known platform there focus area of discussion was about international incidents. About 70% of discussion was of foreign policies. But does it really effect local people? It is not even beneficial for middle class or people living in rural areas. However, local news are really helpful for people living in villages. They get to know about weather conditions which is helpful for farming. In addition to this, in a bad weather local news helps in informing students about school holiday. For instance, local news informed before 24 hrs about a tornado which was about to arrive in West Bengal. So people took different measures. Thus local news saved lives of people living close to sea level. Furthermore, local news not only focus on weather conditions but also on accidents, natural calamities, robberies etc. This help people to be aware of their surroundings. They become more serious in life. Mainly, whenever an accident occur, local people changes their route after knowing about it in local news. This helps in time saving. Thus regional news are more important. In conclusion, I believe though we should know everything happening around us. However, international news are not that much necessary because local news are more relevant and crucial for people in their daily life.
In
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today
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scenerio
,
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news
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companies
are doing tremendous job by giving us information about almost everywhere. In the contrary, the reporting media organizations are spending more money and time in capturing international
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news
. If we
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see
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local
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news
channel are doing a
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good
job showing more realistic and accurate data. I completely
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agree
with the statement that
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local
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news
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company
should receive more fund. The reasons behind my opinion
are portrayed
in subsequent paragraphs. To
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begin
with, in a well known platform there focus area of discussion was about international incidents. About 70% of discussion was of foreign policies.
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But
does it
really
effect
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local
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people
? It is not even beneficial for middle
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class
or
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people
living in rural areas.
However
,
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local
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news
are
really
helpful for
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people
living in villages. They
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get
to know about weather conditions which is helpful for farming.
In addition
to this, in a
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bad
weather
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local
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news
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helps
in informing students about school holiday.
For instance
,
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local
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news
informed
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before
24 hrs about a tornado which was about to arrive in West Bengal.
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So
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people
took
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different
measures.
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Thus
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local
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news
saved
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lives
of
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people
living close to sea level.
Furthermore
,
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local
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news
not
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only
focus on weather conditions
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but
also
on accidents, natural calamities, robberies etc. This
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help
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people
to be aware of their surroundings. They become more serious in life.
Mainly
, whenever an accident occur,
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local
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people
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changes
their route after knowing about it in
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local
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news
. This
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helps
in time saving.
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Thus
regional
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news
are more
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important
.
In conclusion
, I believe though we should know everything happening around us.
However
, international
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news
are not that much necessary
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because
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local
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news
are more relevant and crucial for
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people
in their daily life.
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IELTS essay Nowadays news companies spend a lot of money covering international news. However, local news is more relevant to people’s live and should receive more funding. with this statement.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
290 words
5.5
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