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It is becoming more and more difficult to escape the influence of the media on our lives. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a media rich society.

It is becoming more and more difficult to escape the influence of the media on our lives. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a media rich society. RNVeQ
It is undeniable fact that, in the current time it is hard to keep privacy in our lives due to constant surveillance of media. It not possesses the several benefits but also creates some detrimental impact on the society. Both, the merits as well as demerits are discussed further in the ensuing paragraphs. There are certain brighter sides of media influence on our society. Most importantly, the politicians cannot hide the real truth. In other words, journalism is the only tool by which the political party afraid. They are unable to hide anything from their eyes and as a result there is more transparency is the surroundings as compared to previous years. Moreover, media is the only one who provides the news on hourly basis. To elaborate, the printed newspaper publishes news which is called yesterday’s news because it is already broadcaster on the TV channel. Thus, people around the nation can be engaged with the current situation. For example, the natural calamities prediction or the weather forecast shows the future problems and as a result people are prepared well in advance. Therefore, overall it provides a positive impact on the society. Nevertheless, there are certain darker sides too of media coverage on society. To begin with, they publish as well as broadcasting news without any authentication. This to say that, due to misinterpretation of delivered information can create not only chaos but also communal riots in the society. As a result, it creates a threatening environment in the society. Furthermore, due to constant eye on the public figure, there private life is no more private. That is, if well-known person do any small mistake, it will be exaggerated in the large amount and constantly shows on the television. As a result, their image in the community will vanish. To cap it all, these are few negatives too of media. To end up the discussion, as each and every thing have two sides so do media’s impact on human life on society. Along with the merits such as up graded news and well prepared to handle natural calamities, the darker one as no privacy and the reality of news. Thus, it is better advice that whatever the information is delivers; we need to check about its authentication before reacting.
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current
time it is
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hard
to
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keep
privacy in our
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lives
due to constant surveillance of
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media
. It not possesses the several benefits
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but
also
creates
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some
detrimental impact on the
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society
. Both, the merits as
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well
as demerits
are discussed
further
in the ensuing paragraphs.

There are certain brighter sides of
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media
influence on our
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society
. Most
importantly
, the politicians cannot
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hide
the real truth.
In other words
, journalism is the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
tool by which the political party afraid. They are unable to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hide
anything from their eyes and as a
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result
there is more transparency is the surroundings as compared to previous years.
Moreover
,
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media
is the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
one who provides the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
on hourly basis. To elaborate, the printed newspaper publishes
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news
which
is called
yesterday’s
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news
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because
it is already broadcaster on the TV channel.
Thus
,
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people
around the nation can
be engaged
with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
situation.
For example
, the natural calamities prediction or the weather forecast
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shows
the future problems and as a
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result
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people
are prepared
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well
in advance.
Therefore
,
overall
it provides a
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positive
impact on the society.

Nevertheless
, there are certain darker sides too of
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media
coverage on
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society
. To
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begin
with, they publish as
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well
as broadcasting
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news
without any authentication. This to say that, due to misinterpretation of delivered information can create not
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only
chaos
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but
also
communal riots in the
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society
. As a
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result
, it creates a threatening environment in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
society
.
Furthermore
, due to constant eye on the public figure, there private life is no more private.
That is
, if well-known person do any
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
mistake, it will
be exaggerated
in the large amount and
constantly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
on the television. As a
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result
, their image in the community will vanish. To cap it all, these are few negatives too of media.

To
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end
up the discussion, as each and every thing have two sides
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so
do
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media’s
impact on human life on
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society
. Along with the merits such as up graded
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news
and
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well prepared
to handle natural calamities, the darker one as no privacy and the reality of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
.
Thus
, it is better advice that whatever the information is delivers; we need to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
about its authentication
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
reacting.
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IELTS essay It is becoming more and more difficult to escape the influence of the media on our lives. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a media rich society.

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