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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. VBYe7
In this contemporary world of technology, everything we need is available on the internet. Daily news, nowadays, got viral with the help of modern gadgets and high-speed data. Moreover, numerous e-platforms are available to have a sneak peek of literature. I strongly believe that this tech-savvy world will soon acquire all the libraries and newspapers. There are some major benefits of reading stuff online. First of all, almost everyone has access to high-speed data, which makes it easy for them to stay up to date about their surroundings. Moreover, newspaper wastes a lot of paper every day which cause a serious threat to the society and environment. As we all know every day thousands of trees are trimmed to be converted into papers. Just imagine how much trees and papers can be saved by limiting the usage of newspapers. Furthermore, a considerable amount of labor is required to dispose of the newspapers after been read. Hence, these advantages are insisting the society limit the use of newspapers. In addition to this, to buy a book, not only we need money but a room for their storage is also an issue. For example, various online apps and sites such as amazon books, kindle, and, readbooks. com provide a wide range of material to read at a reasonable price. As a result of this, people are shifting from the traditional way of reading to the modern approach of browsing things on the internet. To recapitulate, the affordability and availability of technology with gadgets will shift a major section of society to online media, and soon the printing industry for newspapers and books will disappear.
In this contemporary world of technology, everything we need is available on the internet. Daily news, nowadays,
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got
viral with the
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help
of modern gadgets and high-speed data.
Moreover
, numerous e-platforms are available to have a sneak peek of literature. I
strongly
believe that this tech-savvy world will
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soon
acquire all the libraries and
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newspapers
. There are
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some
major benefits of reading stuff online.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, almost everyone has access to high-speed data, which
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makes
it easy for them to stay up to date about their surroundings.
Moreover
,
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newspaper
wastes
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a lot of
paper every day which cause a serious threat to the society and environment.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
we all know every day thousands of trees
are trimmed
to
be converted
into papers.
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Just
imagine how
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much
trees and papers can
be saved
by limiting the usage of
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newspapers
.
Furthermore
, a considerable amount of labor
is required
to dispose of the
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newspapers
after
been read
.
Hence
, these advantages are insisting the society limit the
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use
of
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newspapers
.
In addition
to this, to
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buy
a book, not
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only
we need money
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but
a room for their storage is
also
an issue.
For example
, various online apps and sites such as
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amazon
books, kindle, and,
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readbooks
.
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com
provide a wide range of material to read at a reasonable price.
As a result
of this,
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people
are shifting from the traditional way of reading to the modern approach of browsing things on the internet. To recapitulate, the affordability and availability of technology with gadgets will shift a major section of society to online media, and
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soon
the printing industry for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
newspapers
and books will disappear.
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IELTS essay In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.

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