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Nowadays more people would rather purchase food than cook at home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? Give ideas about which is better way according to you

Nowadays more people would rather purchase food than cook at home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? Give ideas about which is better way according to you w3pE
The preference for readymade food has been inclined these days. Hence, most of theasse are likely to buy it over preparing at home. There are many pros and cons bahind this tendency which are going to be discussed in the following paragraphs as below. There are two prominent benefits of market food. The prime one is that it is time effective. Owing to the present hectic lifestyle where there is a shortage of time, the readymade food is an excellent source of eating in comparison of cooking. Apart from it, due to the reason of educational as well as business purposes, people have to stay away from home. Therefore, instead of cooking, it would be more convenient to buy food from market. As a consequent, folks would not only save their time but also do their requisite works in the time, goes in cooking. To cite an example of a recent survey stats that 70 percent people prefer eating out just because of saving time and it's convenience. On the contrary, the pre-cooked food is much more expensive as compared to homemade one. Since, it would be the for most preference against home cooked consequently the overall budget would be affected profoundly. Besides it, by the don't of various mixed spices into this kind of food feasibility of falling I'll becomes more. As these food elements cause improper digestion of food. This, people could suffer with ramifications diseases such as obesity. In this way, this trend can be delitorious either in terms of cost effectiveness or nuterious ditery plan. In conclusion, although eating out has several practical advantages but, the possible down sind of it can never be left aside at any cost.
The preference for
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readymade
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food
has
been inclined
these days.
Hence
, most of
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theasse
are likely to
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buy
it over preparing at home. There are
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many
pros and cons
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bahind
this tendency which are going to
be discussed
in the following paragraphs as below.

There are two prominent benefits of market
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food
. The prime one is that it is
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time
effective. Owing to the present hectic lifestyle where there is a shortage of
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time
, the
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readymade
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food
is an excellent source of eating
in comparison
of cooking. Apart from it, due to the reason of educational
as well
as business purposes,
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people
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have to
stay away from home.
Therefore
,
instead
of cooking, it would be more convenient to
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buy
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food
from market. As a consequent, folks would not
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only
save their
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time
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but
also
do their requisite works in the
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time
, goes in cooking. To cite an example of a recent survey stats that 70 percent
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people
prefer eating out
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just
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because
of saving
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time
and it's convenience.

On the contrary
, the
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pre-cooked
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food
is much more expensive as compared to homemade one. Since, it would be the for most preference against home cooked
consequently
the
overall
budget would be
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affected
profoundly
.
Besides
it, by
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't of various mixed spices into this kind of
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feasibility of falling I'll
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As
these
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food
elements cause improper digestion of
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food
. This,
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people
could suffer with ramifications diseases such as obesity. In this way, this trend can be
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delitorious
either in terms of
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cost effectiveness
or
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nuterious
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ditery
plan.

In conclusion
, although eating out has several practical advantages
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, the possible down
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of it can never be
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left
aside at any cost.
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IELTS essay Nowadays more people would rather purchase food than cook at home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? Give ideas about which is better way according to you

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